Beautifully written, I'm smitten.

"thrice to mine and thrice to thine and thrice again to make up nine": what a wicked spell your trio of triplets cast! Enthralling.

I am softly puddling.

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM. Delightfully delicious.

The imagery here is so strong, that concept of a residue, both physically and in terms of flavour/aroma comes through so strong (if you'll excuse the aural pun).

I'm so very sorry to hear that you and he are having to go through this - Cancer S*cks! All the best for his quick recovery!

Thanks for your comment on “The Blue Life”!

Write more poetry. Maybe I can dredge up another chapter of The Blue Life.

I liked this for several reasons. Not many people know how to write real poetry, they just rhyme words, but there is more to it than that. Your poem does what it should; it paints a picture, tells a story and gives us just enough to know and love what is happening.
Kudo's - well done

Very special and thanks so much..
Was reading about linga…like the union of masculine and feminine..so so special and also hot..
JT

Thank you Paul. I am devastatingly heartbroken and trying to be hopeful and strong. I love him too much to lose him. 💜

Atomica24. Thank you so much. A poem is only as good as the inspiration - You xxx

gorgeous

I love this poem. It’s the first one of yours I’ve read. As a feminine gay male I can SO relate to your heart and the eroticism you’re expressing!
I put myself in your knickers when I read your poetry but would love to see a poem as you write from an effeminate male’s perspective.
-a fan

You are an awesome poet of porn! I’m a mostly gay man and I love your work.

Thank you again LDS for a beautiful masterpiece. I just love your way with words.

OH MY!! So deliciously wicked, wild & wonderful.

So sensuous, beautiful & sexy. Makes me shiver with excitement.