- Erotic Poetry
- curtains drawn
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Click heresinged eyes in sunrise
he thought he dreamed her
floating through cream colored
curtains
window open inviting
wisp warm scents of jasmine
to evoke the senses
slowly like a firefly
she hovered over his smooth skin
watching his nude pulse beckoning
her lengthy lavish nails lingering
upon his sultry swollen lips
he felt her throbbing heart
delirious with feverish urges
he gasped when
slithering slightly her mouth
probed the essence of his
power unleashing its fire
from slow burn to split eclipse
in an ashen sky
his heart bemoaned awakened
to drawn curtains
streaked in liquid tears
his mind shivered sensing withdraw
in accepted certainty that
dreams like vampires
are kindling for sunbeams as
resurrected cinder winks of slumber
- COMMENTS
Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poems thread over at the forum.
The sexy cool ones. You know the ones you just can't wait to see munch on someone. "Bite me! Bite her! Bite someone."
Okay, the poem. :)
This part is a real gem:
"dreams like vampires
are kindling for sunbeams"
"his heart bemoaned awakened
to drawn curtains
streaked in liquid tears"
If you don't mind a slight suggestion, I think having the words bemoaned and awakened side by side doesn't quite work. And liquid tears is okay, but it's a little redundant. All tears are liquid unless there is some sort of dust tears that vamps have. I'm guessing that's possible. ;)