- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Liberty?
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Borders flowed with the waterway
in a grand river now muddied:
goosesteps of the minute, men self
ordained to trample the tired,
the poor and huddled masses.
- COMMENTS
I liked the use of words and space. Because I'm not a wordsmith, I would appreciate if someone could clarify for me, would this be considered metaphor? The message and symbols are very overt and plain.
Though I disagree with the message, I appreciate the way (though I think the acrostic is quite inappropriate)the author expressed his/her opinion in a very artistic presence.
deserves to be read slowly, and more than once or twice, so it can be absorbed and appreciated. excellent piece with so few words.
maria
the metaphor in this short and well crafted poem
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