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Click hereI say not sure where I found the strength to speak maybe it was the shock of what I just heard.
The next thing I know I am over Faith's shoulder and she is carrying me out of the bathroom and into the main room.
"Did you think we were done?"
She asks as she closes the bathroom door once we are in the main room and then walks over to the bed.
"Hell no I'm nowhere near done with you C."
She says as she dumps me back first onto the bed and i look up at her as she looks down at me.
"I'm your rebound girl,"
She continues on.
"It's my job to fuck your brains out until you can't remember your own name, let alone Xander's."
She finishes off by saying.
I look up at Faith and mentally say to myself.
"Who?"
- COMMENTS
obviously this is a very hot depiction of girl-girl sex, made hotter by the mental images of some favorite characters. i like how you managed to more or less capture their personalities accurately. the alternate pov device is good; its one ive always wanted to use but couldnt quite pull it off. i thought it was funny how the parts told from cordelia's pov were less grammatically correct and sort of spacy and the parts from faith's were analyzing and possessive
very irritatingly written; uses alternative POV's to duplicate every part and skips a line after every sentence if not after every word. As tho the writer wants to stretch the story out to cover as many pages as physically possible. I can't imagine how the writer could imagine that this would somehow improve the story!
i love the story made me laugh more then turn me on and had faith down packed lol a few lines had me laughing really hard when i pictured it especially when faith was thinking "Please close, please close, please close, please close, please close, thank God." after the anal lol
This was a good story it may have been a bit long due to the two point's of view going over the same stuff but it was also interesting (at least to me) to read from both of the character's persectives. I also hope that there is a sequel in the works.
I dont really think that two stories would be the way to go . The switchingback and forth is a cool unique styl what the writer should work on is espresing the difren views with out dwelling on thing we all ready knew If thatmakes sense to any one els.