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Click hereI nodded that I was. She pulled off her wedding ring and tossed it over her shoulder.
"My Mamita's gonna love you," she assured me.
I thought about it for a second and had to laugh inside ... I hoped she didn't love me too much.
"Come on!" She took my hand but I resisted. "What?"
I popped the tape of my Mother's adventures from the VCR and shoved it into her purse.
"Really?" She put her hands on her hips and tilted her head at me.
"A momento," I said, "of our first date."
She shook her head, grabbed my hand, and led me out of the rear service entrance of the bar and into the night.
I guess my Mom was right after all - I really was never coming back.
They lived happily ever after.
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- COMMENTS
I have a habit of over thinking incest stories. Thus is one of those stories that I am simply not sure of. Does the mother simply look at her son as another custimer? Does the son care so little about his mother that he leaves without saying? Sometimes I can not figure out what the author is trying to present.
He could've talked to her and sorted things out; you don't leave your mom like that. Shit. Melanie is just a vengeful bitch and is using him, that's all.
IF all these are connected then you need to retitle them using numbers so readers know what order to read them in. reading them out of order is confusing to say the least and makes readers give up and avoid you in the future due to your laziness with the titles. find a good editor and retitle these stories then they might be worth reading.
I got carried out by your story.
You have a hell of a talent as a writer.
You should be earning tons of cash with your talent.
think about it and.
Keep going.
That was a little different than your usual. I'm not sure how to take it. It was also the first one that I noticed that didn't have some tie-in to your other stories. At least not yet. I still hope to see a little more girl-girl in your product; you're still a bit short on those. Nevertheless, even though this one had me scratching my head a bit, I still give it 5* just on the quality of your work. Keep them coming please.