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Sisters Surprise Ch. 01

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Part 1 of the 2 part series

Updated 06/09/2023
Created 01/05/2019
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Warning: This fiction story contains the discovery of sisters discovering their attraction to each other.

This is my first attempt at writing a story, any feedback would be most grateful. More chapters are planned if this does well.

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As college was kicking students out for the winter break, Emma at 19 years of age was keen to go her nice warm home and begin enjoying a hard-earned reprieve from the barrage of coursework which had been dragging her down.

The bus awaited her and an hour bus ride to boot, so she parked her herself on a seat towards the front and pulled her phone out of her pocket with the aim of drowning out the noise of the people talking and sluggish diesel engine pulling away from every junction.

The 19-year old saw she had a message from her older sister Amy who had moved back home after splitting up with her asshole of a boyfriend. It read, "Hi Emma, I'm back home now boyfriend cheating on me, bastard. I've missed you, we so need to catch up, see you soon xx."

Emma sat there with a huge smile on her face with the excitement of seeing her sister at home for the first time in a year. She then went through her bag to find her earphones and after feeling around she got them, plugged it in her phone and turned up the volume to sink into her seat and daydream the bus ride home.

Once home, she walked through the front door to find her parents and sister awaiting her, almost like it was to be an intervention and she got scared.

"Hi hunny", dad said. "Me and your mum have got something to tell you and your sister". Emma glanced over to Amy with a look of confusion and received the same look back.

"We're going on holiday to Cuba this christmas, you two are all grown up now and know how to look after yourselves, so we felt it was time to have our own break," added mum. "We'll leave you some money for a few weeks so you can get any food and other bits you might need." "When do you leave?" asked Amy. "Yeah mum, this is all sudden" added Emma.

"We'll be leaving in the morning, sorry it's so late, but it was just a spur of the moment thing we decided last night and seeing as you're now both here, it was the perfect time to tell you." added Dad.

"Umm... okay," said Amy. "I guess we can manage it eh sis?" "Yeah, absolutely!" said Emma.

"Great!" dad said. "It's an early flight, so we're heading off the airport shortly and staying there for the night, so that way we're well rested, you two have a great christmas together and we'll see you in the new year, we'll get you some lovely presents while we're gone, may as well do something special this year."

As the sisters helped their parents carry their luggage to the car and waved them off, they walked back inside the house to warm up.

"I'm gonna go take a shower and relax, no parents and no boyfriend, I could do with some me time," said Amy.

"That's cool!" said Emma "I'll be down here just catching up on some TV."

Amy slowly took herself up the staircase, went into the bathroom to turn on the shower. She pulled a towel from the cupboard in the hallway and began to undress. She was 5ft 11, slightly taller than the average woman and she enjoyed that, using it to her advantage as a strong, resilient woman.

She took off her t-shirt to reveal 36C breasts which were supported in a sexy front-clipped bra in a luscious sapphire colour, which then matched the tight thong around her size 10 waist wearing underneath her . Amy liked to dress sexy for herself and had the figure to do so.

As she freed her breasts from the grip of her bra she let out breathe of relief, she then slid her thong down her sleek thighs, her hot womanhood was cleanly shaved, not a spec of hair thanks to her waxxer which she enjoyed going too.

Amy stepped into the shower and basked underneath the warmth of the water running down her body, allowing all of her problems to wash away. As she poured the shower gel in her hands and manoeuvred them around her body, she could feel herself getting ever so slightly turned on as her hands caressed her erogenous zones.

Her now ex-boyfriend, John was a waste of space and could not satisfy her sexual needs, always focused on his own orgasm and was terrible at licked her pussy. She always had to go and get herself off afterwards as he slept. She was unable to take it any longer and had to leave him.

After finishing up in the shower, Amy stepped out with her body dripping wet. She wrapped the towel around herself and made her way into her bedroom, kept the same way she left just a year ago when she moved out. Mum had changed her sheets and cleaned up so it was all ready for her arrival.

She began to dry herself off and couldn't shake the need for sexual release. Once dry enough, she rooted through her personal belongings to find her vibrator. With Emma downstairs she took the opportunity to get herself off.

Some time had passed by and Emma was wondering if her sister was alright, thinking that losing her boyfriend may have been hard on her, despite her sister's strong character.

Emma took a decision to order in some pizza which would arrive in an hour thanks to backlog on the Friday night near christmas, she then cracked open the bottle of white wine in the fridge for herself and her sister and enjoy a movie on Netflix just like they always used to do before Amy left.

Once off the phone with the pizza place, she scooted herself off the sofa and made her way upstairs to check on her sister, thinking she may be upset. What she found was much to her surprise.

As her bare feet landed on the top of step of the winding staircase she heard what sounded like a whimper coming from Amy's room. She tiptoed across the landing to Amy room. As she peeked in, she was left aghast at what she saw.

Amy was leaning back on the headboard of her bed, legs spread wide open exposing her sodden labia to the air as the vibrator graced itself on her clitoris. Emma had not seen another girl masturbate before, let alone her own sister. She rushed back downstairs, her body filled with so many emotions, but could feel her own pussy moisten unwillingly after witnessing her sister pleasure herself.

Could she really have just been turned on by the sight of her own sister getting herself off?

Emma wasn't wearing much herself with a tights and a long skirt. She decided to strip right there and then, laid on the on the sofa and explored her body. She was tall like her sister but grew bigger breasts at 36D and always bragged about it to Amy.

Her hands slid across her breasts, caressing and squeezing them, pinching her nipples lightly, her right hand then moved to her clit which was so sensitive by this point and completely sodden.

She rotated her fingers in a clockwise direction as she preferred and allowed herself to sink into the warmth of the sofa and her own sexual desires, even sliding fingers in and out of her tight, delicious opening as she brought herself to orgasm, only to release warm fluid in doing so. Something she had never done before.

As she opened her eyes... she was startled to find a naked Amy standing over rubbing herself. "Oh my god Amy!" as she panicked to find something to cover her own naked body. "Why are you down here masturbating over me!?"

"I came down stairs for a drink to find you here and I couldn't help myself, seeing your beautiful body laying, writhing in pleasure, so I dropped my gown and had to join you, sorry I scared you." Amy said softly.

*knock knock*

"SHIT! That's the pizza delivery guy!" Emma said in a hurried tone at her sister. "Get your gown on and answer the door, it's already paid for."

Emma hurried to hide under the throw that was on the back of the sofa as the front door opened to a middle-aged man who had no clue he had two sisters who were naked under the cloth in front of him.

Amy quickly shut the door behind her due to the freezing cold outside and her unclothed body under her gown.

As Amy sat on the floor in front of the sofa where her naked sibling lay... she asked "So what got you so hot and horny you had to flick yourself off down here!?"

Emma not being a shy girl replied "I saw you doing it and I couldn't help myself..."

TBC

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
WTF?

What's with the favorable comments? THIS IS ABSOLUTE 14yo GARBAGE!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good Story and GREAT body discription

You have a very original story. My wife is 5'9" and has 34 inch hips (a perfect size 10.) Her top is 38 D. Too many writers get their descriptions and sizes messed up. I did date a lady who was 5' 6" with 34C and 36 hips. My wife is also Bi and women are alway attracted to her. I have known her since she was 17 but we did not get together until 17 years later. I like how you continue the story? A California guy reader. CHEERS

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice start

Nice start butcheck your grammar closet

DocErotic3DDocErotic3Dover 5 years ago
Some (Hopefully) Useful Feedback

First of all, I liked this story as a good start. I'm a big fan of sister/sister incest fantasies and I enjoyed this. The characters, while not especially notable, were mostly believable, but could do with some good fleshing out.

There is a wonderful essay on how you can tell when lesbian erotica is written by a man. It's funny, but thought-worthy. (I believe it's under Humor & Satire.) One of the items in the essay is that men really focus on things like breast size, or other body measurements. Simply, it's not necessary under most circumstances and can actually take away from the character. Read your story again, but completely skip over any measurements or references to size. I think you'll see that it's not needed.

P.O.V. is very difficult in stories or chapters, especially as short as this one. The story seems to be mostly about Emma's experience, not about Amy's. While Amy's feelings and actions are important plot movers, We don't necessarily need to know about them right now. Consider having them talk about it later.

I think the term "aghast" might not be the best term to use when Emma finds Amy masturbating. Certainly a bit of shock, one that might make her unable to stop watching before she dashes downstairs. Would she be shocked that her sister is masturbating? Probably not other than her choice of timing. I liked that you have her wondering if she's aroused because she saw another woman masturbating or if it was because it was her sister.

One last bit of food for thought. Erotica, especially lesbian erotica, is most effective when it deals with emotions. Incest even more so. There's a hint of Emma's feelings towards Amy at the beginning but you should at least consider expanding on that emotion. How did they get along as they grew up? Was there a hint of something more than normal sisterly love in the past?

I think you're showing great potential and should definitely keep writing, especially another chapter. I hope you find this helpful. There is no "right way" or "wrong way" so consider and take or leave what works for you. Hope to be seeing more from you soon!

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