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To be continued
Thanks for reading I hope you enjoyed.
Feedback and comments are welcome, I like hearing what you thought of my story so I can continue to improve. I have tried proofreading it by myself but being the writer I get tunnel vision and might miss things.
Next story will include Meg's friends so stay tuned for that if you have any suggestions I'm open to it.
- COMMENTS
This story is well-written, and has outstanding love scenes, but it would be even better without the (overdone) incestual element. The plot and love scenes are in exactly the right proportion, and together really develop the story very well.
I hope you really do come back and finish the story it looks like its shaping up to be a harem and thats my favorite, the boss and his sisters friends are in for a surprise I hope I get to read it
Thank you for leaving your feedback I will definitely be thinking about it while writing part 3. I want to continue to improve so thank you for the advice.
I loved it. I do think it needs some more romance. I would love for it to continue but I would think that they need to stay together as a family. Maybe make mat more of a patriarch with all the girls including megs friends and Kathryne. I do love a incest pregnancy or two. Looking forward to the next chapter.
You're at a crossroads in your story - stroke story or meaningful story. The story started with the two sisters in LOVE with their brother. The sex action is good but you've dropped/diminished the romantic connection. Adding more partners will dilute it even further, so tread carefully. What's their future look like? Is it different for each sister?