by 2rivers
I am amazed at your phrasing... so intriguing. Excellent poem... mirror as time travel - wonderful. "deep as shallow heaven." inspired ending. Very good.
jim : )
An intriguing look at and comparison of a mirror and water; not always an easy poet to grasp. Took a couple reads to really enjoy the flow of words here.
Mirrors have an innate honesty that can't be denied. What you see is what's there.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.
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