All Comments on 'I am the Wraith'

Pain is all i've felt uptil now

real Kick-er lines : hv commented on ur other poem also You're a Deep one !

Maybe you're too hard on yourself. Or maybe not. What I can tell you is if you never risk there's no reward and pushing out those who offer you love is a good way to assure you never get what you're looking for. Well written.

That whole 'love people write about' thing is overrated, a rush of neurochemicals that dissipate after 18months tops (unless unrequited, that's another story and trust me, that's a very lonely road.) After those chemicals fade, the love worth having is the 'love' that exists as a verb. The conscious, constant choices to create a life with another person, to come together and share life's burdens as well as it's happinesses. Those chemicals will only ever take you so far, but the daily commitment to another person, to accept them and cherish them no matter what, that's what 'love' really is. And you, even with your emptiness and pain, you can make this commitment.