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Click hereShe sighs a breath of relief, and I lean down to her. "Sorry, Hon.". I say.
She looks at me like I am nuts. "For what?"
I smile. "I couldn't hold out."
She pulls me into a deep kiss, and looks at me. "The best part of that is feeling you cumming inside of me like that. I Love It."
I smile. "And the best part for me is making you, and feeling you orgasm around me."
I see Karen light up and smile. "Ugh, they are in love." Says Joe.
I look over and they are watching us, obviously done themselves. I look at Joe and laugh. "Fuck Off."
"There's my buddy." He laughs. We all lay there relaxing for a few when Joe sighs. "We should go get Anna before Grandma spoils her any more."
"When did this happen?" I sigh.
Karen rolls over leaning on my chest. "When did what happen?"
"We stop having sex like this. It wasn't too long ago we would have gone all night, until we fell asleep." I say with a smile.
Karen tugs on my chest hair. "If memory serves, about 6-7 months after you knocked me up." She says smiling at me. "And I wouldn't change a thing." We just look into each other's eyes for a moment, and she pats my chest. "Let's go rescue the girls."
We get dressed and head home, with Joe and Beth following in their car.
- COMMENTS
Very fun series to read! I appreciate how you grew as an author through the series as well. I look forward to reading the next generation!
The difference in this writing style is making the story difficult to read ... Most often the easier style is telling a story ... example ... "I see Karen light up and smile. "Ugh, they are in love." Says Joe. (SHOWING Style as in this story ... Rather than TELLING a story ... I SAW Karen light up and SMILED. "Ugh, they are in love," Joe SAID.
The story itself is not bad.
This has been an incredible series, so loving but hot and sexy at the same time. Thank you, I look forward to your next project.
Very poor ending to a great series. It seems that you forgot about Ezzie. I suggest that you write an Epilogue to tye up all the loose ends.