All Comments on 'A Sissy Husband'
by imaginesex101
- 19 Comments
Interesting story, but there are a bunch of grammatical errors. Either proofread it yourself or get an editor to look it over.
Your language usage and storytelling skills leave much room for improvement.
but it was somewhat hard to follow. Should probably explore more of how Jeff became a sissy and have that more toward the beginning. And yeah you need some gramatical work as it really got confusing when after jeff gets dolled up again and goes to meet his wife for breakfast. And why was the gardener involved. He sorta just comes in out of the blue so you should explain that a little further and how that came about.
This is a really cute and short story...it does leave the reader wanting more...definitely what an author tries to inspire! Keep them coming! I want to know the outcomes!
Keep going. It works well as a starting piece. You've got a nice writing style but watch the pronouns etc.
Not bad but could use a little more cleaning up. Some confusion comes about while reading as nothing is given any context, stuff just happens. Also need to keep in one tense-past or present but only one. It jumps back and forth. It is okay as a start, I think it would be much better if you spent a little time putting some structure to it.
Not a lot of details yet but a very good overview. Can't wait till the next installment
I liked this as a good start. Please continue. I too am a sissy husband and I'd love to read about sissy adventures of a husband submissive to his wife -- like I am. I can't wait to read the next chapters.
yes i been a sissy husband for five years now it started one day as we were fooling around i told my wife if she could do anything she want what would it be she told me i like to have you dress as a maid for a week i told her all right i be your maid for a month how that and you do my yard work and no bitching about it she said yes only if you do the same you have to shave your body hair dear we girl do not have hair on are body so here some cream and now go when you are done come to the bed room and i will help you get started been my maid well after i was done i went to her on the bed were bra panties nylons corsets and a maid outfit well after a hour i was dress as her maid i then made coffee she came out with some pills here dear you need to take your pills i do not want any thing to happen you need to do as a girl do every day i toke the pills one blue and a white one she then said i take the blue pill again at supper time well it was a week into been a maid i have the whole house clean then she said to-night dear we will go out for supper down town and do some shopping i then told her i guess i wear male clothes she said silly girl you are a girl for a month you will go out as my girl friend i said yes dear well we went out had a nice supper then we went into a store she told me i need some new panties and bra and a nightie i said yes i do the one i got from you are small just then a sale lady came over my i help you lady yes we need some thing my girl friend need some sexy panties and bra and a sexy nightie the lady smile at me well she do look lovey now here dear remove your top and bra while you do that we will find a black bra well after they came back they were smiling you friend will love this outfit it will show off her tits and ass i can knot wait to see her in that outfit rember now he do not know his breast has grow mush yet while dear its time you make him take three pills a day that will help them fill out mover well there started to dress me as the lady put my new bra on she rub my nipples a bit it felt good as she keep it up my wife came in she saw the lady playing with my nipples she ask do you like this girl i said yes dear just then she ripe the bra off the lady pinch them i said yes that feel good then she ask do you want to feel how we girls feels when a man suck are tits yes then you will be are girl and still do as told yes well after that night i know how a women feels when she has a cock shove into her the month was over now and i told my wife i need to go to your hair dresser and get my hair done i need to look more like a girl and i need some new bra the ones i brought are small well now i am the wife
It would be great if you would write about the feminzation process.
This is a great start to a sissy husband story which I too am living right now. I too am a sissy husband who serves my Mistress wife. I watch her suck her lover's cock and get fucked by him, then I lick his juicy cum out of her cunt. Then, while I'm eating his first load of cum, he gets behind me and fucks my man-pussy deep and hard -- AND I LOVE IT !!! Please tell more chapters to this story, especially how Jeff came to be a CD sissy husband (just like me). Also, he needs a different name. I go by "Cindy". What's his CD name going to be??
I liked it because the story got right into the good stuff with no lead up with the usual here's how it all began stuff. This was fun.
If that's what Jeff wants and hes happy with it and Pam's happy with it then it's okay It's too bad Pam didn't keep her marriage vows sacred and not stray to the gardener but that's their their happiness