by Miyelo Ina
Your story was beautifully written and had me very aroused only a few paragraphs in. Thank you for sharing yourself this way.
You hit the target with this one. Well put together, and highly erotic. Nice work.
Glad I had the honor of reading it before you posted. I knew it would be a winner.
Excellent story. Lots of build up, and the perfect dash of eroticism. And I love the way you use touch throughout your story. Very binding theme.
......very nice story....loved the tenderness, the guilt,the forbidden.....perfect story.
I'm not your usual guy im bound by my genetic make up as man not affraid to express his emotions. your stories this one for example is so heart warming it makes me sad and happy. please keep writing
Reading this is kind of refreshing. It is the way life really is, not like some porn author imagines it. I just hope these 2 had enough fun with each other to last them. Would be nice if they meet again somehow...