by lckscknfck7
the strangest story that I've ever read. The only reason I didn't give it a zero is because the story is well written and the characters are good.
First, I'd like to thank everyone that left positive feedback via email. Feel free to post the same right here, so others might see it.
As far as getting a score of 25 out of 100 because the story is strange... this isn't necessarily a NORMAL forum. The story is supposed to be strange. I'm trying to write stories which revolve around Lindie in such a way that they can stand on their own. If I'm not having much luck with that, I'd ask that you read Pam and Introducing Lindie for further character development.
For my dedicated readers, if you've read my other stories, you may notice a thread. Other authors (Stephen King, especially) do the same thing, but in my case, it wasn't intentional. The characters that were already fleshed out just seemed to fit, so you may see some familiar faces appearing in some unfamiliar situations.
The first story and I'm gonna dive into the other parts after work tonight. This was well written. I can tell that there's an outline and flow to the story. The it was durations were well done and match the story very well. Only (minor) bad thing about this story is that I usually like a little more back story to the characters. Other than that, I have no complaints.
Keep it up
Not usually a fan of horror (there's enough of that in the real world), but I found this intriguing so will read on for a while, see if I can elevate my score of 4 stars to 5.