All Comments on 'Brenna at The Academy Ch. 01'

Fun story. It has all the elements of bdsm you would expect, but none of the brutality or contempt you sometimes read. Its a wonderful setting, and the characters seem pretty interesting. I look forward to more.

Fun premise and start. I look forward to seeing what happens when Brenna doesn't make it back to work on Monday because I think she is going to like The Academy!!

Thank you, Gortmundy! I’m delighted with your comment and it’s high praise for me, as that is precisely kind of what I was going for.

There will be more, I promise, and it might get a bit more intense, but I’ll be trying to hold that line of low on contempt/brutality but high on sensual bdsm fantasy more or less. Trying to minimize personal turnoffs and stick to what I find most erotic in these fantasies in this series. Thanks again for commenting!

Thank you for the comment rentturtle! So glad you enjoyed it, and Oh Myyyyy…!!! (Re: your prediction)

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She better like the Academy, because if not she won't sign up for more time there and we, the readers, will be deprived of her further adventures there. And that would be a shame. There are so many possibilities for more very interesting and exciting experiences ahead. I'll be looking for them. Well done, SpiceRoute.

What a stunning story I can't wait for the following parts.

Excellent story SpiceRoute! It didn't take me long to get "sucked in". Lol I could "see" her as she moved from area to area, and her desire building as she gave over to her submission. I am curious as to the sensors, I am guessing they are invented for the story, but what a great idea!

Thank you all, Submisky35, Anonymous and cde102 for the kind comments! I appreciate you taking the time to leave me these positive notes. Happy that the story brought some enjoyment!

cde102, the sensors, like everything else in my writing, are a work of imagination invented for the fantasy of the story. ;)

I can’t wait for Breanna’s dilemma on Sunday evening. 5 of 5 stars.

Gorgeous story! I came so hard right at the end.

great start, setting Brenna in her role as a sub.

Obey and learn, be rewarded by an orgams

Nice to read, have to confess i imagined me in her place

Wow, Thank you Prospecting_for_snow and daddyslittleminx ! Glad the stories bring enjoyment…what can I say…CSH (coming so hard) FTW! ;)

Thanks, anonymous! Glad it was evocative and nice to read for you. It seems to me Brenna is discovering herself as a bit of an explorer and frustrated sensation seeker ;)

Lovely story. Your writing is excellent and extremely erotic. Brenna is appealing and perfectly eager for her training. I will incorporate some of the Academy techniques in training my slave. Many of them mirror techniques I've used in the past, but I like some of your subtleties. Thanks.

Thanks a bunch for the positive comments!

A caveat that these are fantasy stories for personal fantasy enjoyment from someone not living nor endorsing “the lifestyle” in any shape or form, and thus not remotely any type of manual. Use as inspiration for real events only at your own ( and not another’s, please ) risk.

Definitely not into anything using terms like slavery myself - connotations far too icky and horrifying.

Thorough ongoing consent is the only way these things could be sexy! ;)

Inviting a partner to read and see if they like the ideas should be the only starting point for any discussions about possibly bringing anything out of the fantasy realm into reality.

It a wonderfully well written story. Extremely erotic. I am envious of you talent. While I don't endorse wholsale pain in a bdsm relationship, a little spanking is sometimes required. You must not force anyone to be submissive. It's something that some women feel a need or This story typifies what a true submissive woman is. For 7 wonderfulyears I had a great BDSM relationship. It was loving and kind but very structured. My submissive had very similar poses and rules. She loved it and even craved a bit of humiliation as well. Bdsm was a daily practise in our house. She never wore underwear anywhere and was very frquently naked behind our closed doors. This brings back so many wonderfull and lovely moments we shared. Unfortunately she left us in a tragic automobile accident in 1984.

Thank you for the kind complements on the writing, Crippled. I’m sorry for the loss of your partner.

I think being submissive in the bedroom is something that some PEOPLE, not just women, sometimes enjoy. Some identify with it as a lifestyle or identity, and many others just like to dabble sporadically in different kinks to spice things up!

I agree, real pain is not a turn on to me, and everything being consensual and negotiated is a must.

Brenna’s character is empowering herself to explore something she has long found intriguing, and so far seems to be having a very enjoyable few days in the fantastical setting of the story, hopefully to the delight of some readers ;)

Great start! Very well balanced. I’m not a fan of the blackmail type of sage word, I appreciate that it’s just a different approach to kink but I prefer the straightforward approach of red means stop the scene. When safe wording means getting booted out of the academy for a minimum of 6 months, then that lends itself to the risk of a sub not using a safe word when it might be needed. Other than that one hang up (of mine) then yeah brilliant start.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Thank you, Tess! You make a great point. In next instalments there is a bit of a modification at times with a word like that when new, boundary pushing activities are tried.