by CindyTV
Much better ending but BTB is not your forte. I'm sure you could be cruel if you had to be but I just don't want to accept it! Stick with being the Sweet Cindy we love and leave the BTBs to SaddleTramp.
The last sentence assumes she would have the opportunity to make that same mistake, but there's no guarantee she'll ever find another love of her life. So she's just screwed. Of course he's not exactly in a bed of roses. That's the reality of divorce. No winners. After reading your opening I have to wonder if you're an "open" crossdresser or are still in the closet in real life and how that effects your liking cuckold stories. PS - only a husband can be a cuckold, by definition - not a boyfriend if that matters.
Cindy, in all the years I've been a member here, also under other aliases, I've come to the conclusion that women just don't write good BTB's but yours is the cats meow. You surprise me and both your Literature and writing skill surpass 99% of the writers here but for that 1% I gave the title as Authors. Although those Authors write stories that have a minimum of seven pages in each of their stories, I'm going to Favorite you in hopes that in the future you can at least try for a minimum of three page stories, Please? I have helped those favorites of mine and the best advice I can give you are these. 1) No dot dot dots, 2) No compound words, 3) The MOST important of all Get yourself Text Aloud to write your stories. I use Jennifer's sexy voice to listen to all the stories which make them so much more enjoyable. You write a few paragraph or sentences and listen to it giving yourself time to catch the mistakes and it also gives you pause to change and/or add to your story. If you can't afford it I'll send it to you, I have an Enterprise License. Score = 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS1 Good Luck in the future! Yes, I have the credentials.
Well, while I really think they got off easy. Not a BTB more of a revenge. Still it is a cheap way to dump a useless whore and move on.
I love it......but why not, you most certainly have a knack for creating my kind of LW stories.
Honestly refreshing to see a story where the protagonist isn't a complete doormat like the other cuck story authors write them to be. I find these cuck stories to be rather degrading not just to men, but also to women who are simply stereotyped as cock hungry sluts that fall for the next brute they see.
Yes, I know it is only a story but I cannot comprehend how a long term partner in a marriage can be so utterly bereft of emotional intelligence!
All adultress women deserve to be punished and thrown out on the streets, no mercy on them burn the biches
Always a fan respect your bravery, putting yourself out here cuckolding to a bad is being told he’s worthless. It can be wrapped in a Christmas paper. It can be said with all the love that a person thinks they have but cockling is telling him he’s useless a cock is a man that accepts it Having a wife cheat on you without you knowing or with you knowing I’m not doing anything about it is a cockled I’m sorry, but they’re still men who are men and cuckolding is the worst insult a woman could give us
If only it went a bit longer it would’ve been better. It cost you a point.
I liked the story but it was too short.
Remains 4/5
Women, women, women. What's that olde adage? "Can't live with them, can't live without them".
Like the Consequences of your story. Too many people leave out the Consequences of their Stupidity.
I've been cheated on by various women and never ever did I enjoy it. I found it gut wrenchingand and similar to going through the grief that you feel when your immediate family dies. Takes a goodly time before you notice the fun parts of life. Everyone in the community knows too. Sucks pretty much. Can't imagine the whole cuckold thing being real, outside of porn. Great piece by the way.
I like most of your stories, but this one ended up feeling like you changed the MC. I know you tried to play up that he wasn't a fan of what was happening, just going along to give her some rope in the original series, but I think you failed to pull it off. Nice try though, and to be fair, I never really bought into the MC during the original story. I give you a lot of credit for trying to rehab the MC.
You pulled it off. Matilda had enough rope to do what she wanted and she chose her lover over her husband. MC did a good job by giving her a choice its unfortunate the cunt chose wrong. 4* you lost a star because MC didnt send out the cheating evidence.
Fine, let her make her own choices and hang herself on those choices. But once the affair was going, there was no need to let it go on for so long before throwing her out. And truthfully, by allowing it to go on for so long, the MC was, in some way, tacitly saying he was okay with it.
5 stars, though I don't think just a "fare" divorce is in anyway retribution, personally I think after the divorce is finalized he should send all the damming videos to everyone total nuclear destruction, just divorcing these self-entitled narcissistic sluts isn't nearly enough to send the right message to the feminist movement, the evil ideology that is to blame for the sick and disgusting debauchery. Any woman who does this to her husband need to be destroyed and ostracized so strongly that it creates a wake powerful enough that the message is clear it's evil disgusting disrespectful and will not be tolerated.
10 Big Blazing stars to Cindy for a Hot hot Hot story. Excellent Ending. Thanks, Buster2U
As the Company has a no-fraternization rule, using the video he sued the company. Both George and his wife were fired. And what was worse, George's wife found out, divorced him and took him to the cleaners, so to speak.