by PrettyKittyKaty
I normally don't care for Chapter stories but omg I think you need to write another one with those two. <3
What fantasies did Edward inspire Victoria to have??prettyKittyK
I love characters, pace of the story and ending too. 5 stars! Just wish you would write at least one more chapter!
P.S. I am glad she isn´t turned to werevolf, it is hotter this way
Good writing. A few grammar mistakes aside, it's well written. An enjoyable story that isn't too short, nor too long and exhaustively drawn out. The scenes would of been sexier if they were a bit longer and not so rushed through .Hot,but a tad quick.
Still, Overall I give it 5 stars for an arousing story. And hope to read more on this one. Would like to know what happens the next 2 to 3 days,after all is said and done ??
This is the story I've been looking for since I came to this site! Your story is amazing! If you wrote more about them or other werewolf mating books I would totally buy them. The passion was HOT and it had me very pleased. ;) Continue your writing. Definitely adding you to my favorite authors.
God that was good. Please continue with their breeding. His animalistic roughness and that knot...holy hell I'm so turned on right now. Great job!
I must say, I enjoy the end. Basically says you have a few more days before in done. She is in way over her head, which coincidently is what's getting fucked next.
She's going to me up to her ass in dog cum, which coincidently is.... We all know what the joke in saying here is, right?
Hot, sensual, and left me wanting more. What else can I possibly want? Great job!
I laugh my butt off. It's a good story but boy did I laugh.
Hot. I like the blend between the traditional little red riding hood runs into the big bad wolf and your take on it!
Seems like they both got what they wanted. Wonder what Victoria's mother will thing about a house full of puppies running around? LOL.