All Comments on 'Indian Girl Is Seduced'
by rupanita
- 9 Comments
It looks you have lost your pace. We didn't enjoy much and felt you have didn't check before publishing. When sameera's session started and when Ritu's finished not clear.........
You are capable to writing much better stuff. I waited for a new story for a lonf time for you and you disappointed me this time. Your stories mean alot to us readers. Do w rite more and better than this.
glad you're back!...hope we don't have to wait so long for the next story :-)
This story was hot except for the unsafe sex. With the spread of HIV/AIDS and other STDs in India, the lack of condoms made this story very UN-sexy.
...I prefer the "reluctance" part of "non-consent / reluctance", particularly when the reluctance is not overcome by violence, but by persuasion and seduction...
...and this story, besides using seduction very well, uses a neat plot device to make things far easier for him to seduce her, and for her to be seduced, and thus make things more enjoyable for the reader - a downpour, which is both literally and metaphorically useful to advance the story...
...literally, as a device to ensure that there is minimal delay in her seduction, and metaphorically, like a shower, to prepare her for her seduction...
...extremely well done.
Loved it ; read it twice...I wish I were in Sameera's place. It is lot more exciting to be laid by a stranger and let him take the cherry, rather than the boyfriend or husband who obviously do the job. Wish I had my virginity intact; I curse myself to let my BF take it 7 months before. He is just an average with around 6 inches and normal girth :(