All Comments on 'Jayne's World Pt. 15'

Hesitate to say, but maybe best piece in your Jayne’s World series, so bit surprised scoring isn’t higher (hopefully not a big deal for you as writer of very good erotic fiction) — great dialogue around the erotic photography, intriguing introspection and a bit of drama. Yes, maybe her affair with James is drawing to an end as it should for our main character. Like the “Her/Him” structure — strengthens plot lines while in this piece adds touch of poignancy.

It seems like the differences between the two main characters is becoming stretched - possibly to a point of being snapped?!

Jaynes life seems to be at a crossroads, will she stay in the advertising business and make a “normal” career out of it, or will she be tempted into the world of glamour modelling or further becoming a porn star and get that head rush of exhibiting herself to anyone willing to pay to see and use her?