by owengreybeard
Very original concept, I have never even heard of sleep paralysis, although I am sure it is a real condition. I enjoyed reading it, look forward to reading more.
I loved it but it had me a little creeped out. Did he just kill her at the end?
i have read and reread this over the course of three days.
this is so disturbing and it took obsessing about it for 2 days to let the horror fully germinate. sensual, creepy, and haunting. WELL DONE!
i loved this story so much, i'm doing all i can to have my Husband read it.
i like the paralysis aspect of this story, and the terminal ending surprised me, but just made it all that much more interesting and erotic. *blushes*