All Comments on 'Last Chance Ch. 01'
by m_storyman_x
- 9 Comments
sometimes what you think you want really isn't. Looking forward to next chapter
The sex was hot ....
the varying reactions to Liang are interesting. I would have liked more detail about those who did NOT approve or were intent on staying within social mores ... something equivalent to the descriptions given to the manager and customer who DID approve.
Fun story! Going to be fun seeing where you take us. I have read enough of your stories I wont try to out guess you! I hope you let us know what happens with the wife also.
Cheers
SAGE
This one is so fun that I made it a favorite. Great premise. I am already wondering if other couples might try this therapy. Also caring about the characters and hope that they end up better than they started.
Maybe she doesn't have to tell him three times a page that this is what he said he wanted
Have you considered either reading your story for audio or having someone else do it?