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by dodgeboy2
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Grammar Police
Get an editor. Your grammar and sentence structure are horrendous.
Please find an editor. The story idea was great, but your writing and complete lack of proper punctuation made the story unreadable.
Not reality?
You should have included a couple more disclaimers. I couldn't get past the 3rd paragraph.
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60's male 5'8" overweight at around 280 lbs., married, had bi/gay experiences in my younger years but has remained loyal to his wife since marriage. Still dream of those younger years and love to act them out on-line.
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