by jhealy55
Really loving the story so far, this chapter really heated things up and i cant wait for the next one to see what is about to happen upstairs. Keep the chapters coming. :)
Really love this story. Didn’t think I would be waiting with anticipation for each new chapter. Keep it going.
My wife and I are not so patiently waiting for each chapter. Very good story and build up.
What a build up. Takes the more natural route. Very believable. Please keep them coming, awaiting next chapter with anticipation.
It's shame I couldn't be a fly on their wall, or a crab on their beach.Whilst my wife and daughter were both blessed with beautiful breasts my liking these days is for a more petite shape even though I still love them both dearly.
You have written an epic tale here. I am excited to read the final chapter or chapters. There must be more to come
Surely after all we haven't reached Christmas yet that great festival of giving.
This series should be turned into a movie exactly as its written! Very very addictive reading such a well written story
Just like the other story you wrote, you build and build. The tease is exquisite. My balls are turning blue and aching. Keep it up,...
letting a diesel engine run out of fuel is a really bad idea. i see how it's a plot device, but its hurting my suspension of disbelief. in a porn story. just saying.