All Comments on 'Making a Maid Ch. 01'

But you need an editor. Typos, misspellings, etc. detract too much.

Man I loved the part about you making him your slut, he really deserved it. I think tonight my husband is going to feel my wrath too because I found some of my lingerie in his pants pockets. I think i'll pummel his butt then fuck him raw! Oh the ideas this story gave me..

Lyndie

Could be a rip-snortin', dick-hardening, pussy wetting story, but a lot of editing and rewriting is needed. Remove the SPAG errors as well as the contextual problems.