All Comments on 'My Wife's New Nurse'

Fantastic story, not all fiction, I'm sure. Fine example of true adult behavior, and deepest love on everyone's side. thanks

truly a love story, for all three of them

An excellent job combining graphic sex with love and romance. Based on what you shared, I can only imagine how hard this story was to write. For what my opinion is worth, what was a top notch story. Looking forward to more submissions after your sabbatical.

This is my life and has been for 30 years, minus the sex with anyone else. A little too close for comfort for me.

All I have to say is thank you for writing and sharing this story. I am sorry that 5 stars is all I can give.

MS sucks. Ending was too sad, predictable, and inevitable. This fantasy story was well-written and the best possible spin you could ever put on this tragic situation, but unfortunately, it was a fantasy...

Excellent story

You have a big problem getting pronouns typed properly

Excellent! Just Excellent! Good flow and pace, good imagination, conversations and feel!

Great story loved every minute of it got so into the story I honestly can’t tell you if there were any errors. Sorry you not going to be writing for a while because you write so well. Looking forward to your next adventure. Thanks for the great work.

One 'p' makes it 'moping', as in feeling sorry for oneself..."He moped around aimlessly"

There are two 'p's in mopping

(Now that I've typed it out...it seems... rude)

5* + favourite point...excellent work of "fiction"...Mi

good stuff

Great beginning!

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