All Comments on 'Page's Training Ch. 12'

Keep writing, don't stop!!! Wish there was more right now!!!

This is an amazing story! Makes me want to run out and start my search for a master again. Wish I could find something like this. Your imagination is incredible, and if you have experienced any of this you are sooooo lucky. From both the Dom and sub perspective. Truly amazing! I beg you to continue with the story!

I really like this story... can't wait for the next chapter of the training... i wish i had someone willing to train me as well...

I wish i could find a Master like this. My search hasnt been nearly as wonderful as this. I love this series. Anybody know where caring Masters like this are?

Please hurry up and write the next chapter! Your stories always turn me on!!

Keep writing! i want more!! :)

I've gotten bored and dissapointed with stories before. I've gotten angry and upset. I've been blasé....... But never have I felt ambivalent about a story. Until now. As a writer, you are talented. But the story you've written leaves a lot to be desired. Sure, it's erotic and stimulating, but it's also a tease. And it teases without delivering a reward. So, it also proves that you lack grace and understanding. It shows that you lack judgement, and have poorly chosen some aspects of your story. I'm sorry if that upsets or dissapoints you, but it's how you left me as a reader.

awesome story, i really loved it, ;p but when i finished it i couldnt help but notice

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You are a truly horrible writer and i do not think you should write anymore stories. This series was extremely blasé and dumb. You do not know anything about being a slut enough to write about it. You see, there should be more punishments. I`m a slut for my dearly beloved Master, and you are a horrible writer. Master can write much better stories. Master can write such wonderful stories that you cum just from reading the first paragraph!

I liked it up until you wrote that Nick was married. that is why i voted with a 2 on the voting scale was tempted to give you a 1 but didnt want to be that cruel.

It is far from ideal from my point of view but I still liked it. I would love to see another series done just a little different or several 2-3 part stories. You are a very talented writer and I wish I had that skill as things never flow well for me even if my mind is as dirty. ;)

Thanks and seriously keep writing pls!

But I am disappointed about the wife and kids. At the end of the day what is she?

of space this silly story is. Totally implausible.

I could see this happening to me and I'm a strong woman

i loved the whole story. of course he is married. fantasy yes but a hot one. loved her honest conversations with bobby too.

sorry for the lack of caps my other hand is busy, lol.