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Raised by Wolves Ch. 00

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A twist of fate throws a human girl to the wolves.
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Part 1 of the 2 part series

Updated 10/19/2022
Created 07/17/2013
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Hello, welcome to my first submission! I hope you like the prologue and I hope it makes you want to come back to read the first chapter. Please give me your feedback about the story, I'm new at this writing (and publishing) thing and English isn't my native language so every bit of help I can get is precious. Do criticize but do it in a constructive way and please be nice or leave ; ).

TPiM

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Prologue

Little Jade Bluebell ran through the woods as fast as her small legs allowed her, searching for some place to hide from her parents' attacker. Only wearing her flannel pyjamas and wool socks, she ran through the gelid night in the peak of winter. She ran as fast as her small legs allowed her.

Earlier, Jade had been woken up by a loud crash coming from somewhere inside her house, she thought it might have been a burglar, or worse, a monster and even though she was scared, she managed to gather the courage to get up and wake up her parents. Jade was already a big girl "I am four! I'm not a baby I can do this!" She told herself. Jade got up as silently as possible and walked slowly to her bedroom door which was slightly open and peeked through with one of her big round eyes.

Jade could hear voices, but there was no one in sight. She opened the door gently and ran to her parents' bedroom, her woollen socks effectively muffling the sounds of her steps. She closed the door behind her and ran through the dark room to their bed but it was empty and the sheets were cold.

The little child felt like crying but controlled her anxiety because she knew she had to keep being brave, in case there was something wrong going on. Then while she was pondering what to do she heard her mama's voice, she was crying but she couldn't understand her words. She muffled a sob with her little hand, "someone is hurting my mama!"

Jade gathered her now severely shaken courage, got up, and quietly opened the door and walked along the wall past her room into the kitchen door. From that position she could peep into the lit living room. Her mama gagged and bound to a chair and her papa lying on the floor also restrained with a man straddling his torso while holding a knife to his throat. Her vision got blurry with tears; someone invaded her home and was harming her parents, and there was nothing she could do! The attacker had his back turned to her and was leaning against her papa and saying something in his ear, her papa looked scared. Then she looked at her mama thinking on what she should do, her mama saw her and shook her head in panic without the man noticing, she wanted her to flee.

Jade returned to the kitchen and hid under the table, she was very scared and didn't know what to do, didn't know who to call for help, since she lived in a small cottage in the woods with only her parents. Jade would have to walk down the road through the woods, she was very scared of the dark and of walking alone in the woods, and her mama had told her that there were wild animals in there but she had to do something to save her parents. She decided she would be brave and she would go find someone who could help her.

She unlocked the back-door in the kitchen, remembering to grab the flash-light that her papa had left hanging on a nail beside the door. "I should take it with me, so I won't be scared of the dark", she thought. She stretched on her tip toes and managed to take it of the nail. She quickly left the house and walked through the front yard into the road, once she was far enough from the house she started to run down the road with the lit flash-light guiding her steps.

Jade was getting really tired of running, she never ran for that long before and she was the fastest girl in her class. She knew her mama was friends with their nearest neighbour - June, an old lady that always baked yummy sweets but they had never walked from her home to June's. She didn't know how far from her home she was but she kept going.

Less than fifteen minutes had passed since she had left her home when she heard a noise, leaves shaking and she stopped petrified, maybe a hungry bear was coming to eat her she was looking around for a place to hide when a small ball of fur rolled into the road and landed revealing its nature, it was a big puppy! It ran down the road without seeing her and Jade relaxed, she loved dogs but everything was scary in the dark.

She was about to resume her journey when she heard another rustling in the bushes behind her, she turned around while a big wolf came out of the bushes sniffing the ground. She thought he was going to eat her for sure and she cried as loud as she could, the wolf approached her slowly with his head lowered to her level and his ears pointing upward and forward in an inquisitive fashion and then everything went dark. Jade fainted.

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Oliver McCall was pursuing Thomas, his younger brother who ran away in the middle of the night to play in the woods...again. He was going through a wild phase; he thought it was so cool to be a wild animal that Oliver hadn't seen him in his human form for a week. Thomas apparently enjoyed being as filthy as possible, the only baths he took in the current week were saliva baths and he loved to escape from home at night and go howl at the moon, he was really wrapped up into being a wolf. He was a little terror in the form of a cute little grey wolf.

Thomas was a troublemaker since the day he started walking and could not be left unsupervised for five minutes or he would set fire to the housing compound. Today was the full moon and because his little brother couldn't be left unsupervised he had to stay with him while his twins and his parents ran with the pack in the full moon hunt, this month it was his turn to babysit. Luckily Nina stayed behind to make him company. Nina was a really hot 18 year old from his class, they weren't dating or anything but he knew she had a crush on him and she wasn't a prude so he asked her if she wanted to come stay with him while he babysat his brother and she accepted. He had smuggled a bottle of wine from the kitchen, he thought it made him look cool and maybe it would make him lucky too.

Oliver and Nina were on the couch, they had drunk just enough to be uninhibited but not drunk and they had started to make out! He could still remember the softness of her big boobs and her pert nipple against the palm of his hand. He had finally reached inside her top when he heard the front door closing. That little bastard had run outside! He would be in so much trouble if he didn't find him before his parents got home.

Oliver quickly got rid of his clothes and shifted so he could track his brother faster. He was a big black wolf with a white spot in his chest, and the same amber eyes he had as a human, he was almost as big as his father and was still growing.

His father was the Alpha and he was next in line to be Alpha so most of the pack members respected and love him and all the cubs obeyed him without question...except Thomas the little devil. The only person Thomas feared was their mom, well anyone would fear their mom if she called them by their whole name...even his dad. And that is why he would have to find Thomas before their mom noticed he was gone.

He followed his brother's trail easily through the woods while he sent him a mental warning that he was in big trouble if he didn't come back at once but he was ignored, he was going in the direction of the road without noticing, Thomas was warned to never go into the road because he might be seen by a human, now he would really have to catch him as fast as possible. He saw Thomas running 50 meters ahead of him when he slipped in a twig and rolled into a bush and then right into the road, he couldn't see him anymore and so he ran faster.

He jumped into the road almost colliding with a little human girl, younger than Thomas, with huge dark eyes and silky curly black hair in her pyjamas and socks looking really scared. He cautiously approached her trying to look as little as possible like a big bad wolf. Obviously it didn't work and the girl released a high pitched scream and lost consciousness on the road. It was now officially the worst night of his life.

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Jade woke up feeling really comfortable and warm, thinking she had had a bad dream. Jade thought about calling her mom to tell her about her bad dream, but when her vision focused she was in a strange bed, in a strange bedroom and there was a big man with his back turned to her, so Jade closed her eyes again, to pretend she was asleep.

Oliver noticed the change in depth of the girl's breathing, indicating she was conscious again; he turned to her and saw her eyes were close, she was probably scared of him and instead of crying she was pretending to be asleep. "I know you woke up, I want to help you. You can open your eyes and tell me what happened; you're safe here with me." The girl opened her eyes and looked at Oliver with suspicion.

The little human was now visibly calmer so he spoke: "My name is Oliver, you are in my home. I found you passed out in the road. What happened to you? Did you run away from home?"

Jade shook her head and looked down, she was still very afraid and he was a stranger but she needed help so she told him what had happened, "I fainted when I saw this really big wolf, I thought he was going to eat me!", she said anxiously. "I was outside looking for help, a burglar tied my mama and my papa while I was sleeping, maybe he didn't know I was there, so I got out to get help but I was very far away from anyone who could help!" Jade couldn't hold her tears any longer and started crying after she told him what happened. She was truly scared.

Oliver was very worried, it looked like her parents had been attacked in their own home, the little girl managed to escape apparently because the attacker didn't know she was home or maybe because he thought she was sleeping and chose to restrain her parents first.

He had to do something, this girls parents were in danger and everyone was away hunting but he had to help them. He quickly contacted his father mentally and told him about the situation, "Dad, I found a little human girl alone on the road; she saw me in my wolf form and fainted, She came to just now and told me her parents were attacked in their home, I want to go there."

His father quickly replied, "OK son, you might go but wait for John to go inside, he'll meet you there. Your siblings are going home to watch Thomas and the girl right now. Once you get to the girl's home send me directions. Keep me posted."

Oliver knew Thomas was already regretting his escape since their parents would have to know what happened but still he tried to explain the gravity of the situation to his little brother "Thomas, what you did today was very dangerous, and you will have to explain to mom and dad what you did today, and we both will probably be grounded for a long time but I need your help."

Thomas was too ashamed to look at Oliver so he continued. "You know I found the human girl in the road. Apparently she was searching for help. Her parents were attacked and I'm going to her home to see if they're ok, and I need you to stay near her, keep your human form" Thomas nodded and without another word went to Oliver's room where the girl was resting.

Oliver shifted and followed the girl scent for about ten minutes from the point where he found her. The house had the lights out so he cautiously approached the house from the side and looked into the living room window; he saw two human figures lying on the floor, apparently none conscious. He didn't detect anyone else in the house or outside but still advanced carefully.

The front door was open, he reached mentally to his father, "I'm at the house, it seems like there are two people unconscious in the living room, the lights are out and the front door is open." his father quickly answered, "stay outside John is just a couple of minutes away."

Just then John, his father's Beta arrived in his wolf form, both decided it was best to remain in that form so they wouldn't leave further evidence of the presence of humans that could implicate them in the crime. They secured the house, which was empty except for the people in the living room. Oliver went to the living room while John searched the perimeter outside.

Oliver turned the lights on, what he saw almost made him puke, on the floor were the girl's parents, both dead on a pool of their own blood, there was blood spatter everywhere and there was a message on the wall written in their blood – "I will find her too".

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ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 5 years ago

I confess, I deserve this, starting to read a 2-chapters-and-I-give-up story. Nevermind, worth it, totally hooks you in. Maybe this author will return.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Raised

Please give us more it has been over 3 years since the last chapter

Iread2relaxIread2relaxabout 8 years ago
Great Story.

I agree with StephenJ. This story is captivating. Please continue. 5 stars, btw.

thruholewizardthruholewizardalmost 9 years ago
wow some people are jaded and brutal in their comments ,I h that them in kind .

I thought the story was good so far and yes I over looked your mistakes as I am sure you would over look mine ..Please write more I think you have a talent that is looking to get out . I am very much interested in the story.

Stephen J

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Yes, I know soooo many four year olds that can comprehend and enunciate as well as us logic to get all this out. Their geniuses!

"I fainted when I saw this really big wolf, I thought he was going to eat me!", she said anxiously. "I was outside looking for help, a burglar tied my mama and my papa while I was sleeping, maybe he didn't know I was there, so I got out to get help but I was very far away from anyone who could help!"

How many 4 year olds even know the word "fainted," or what it means?

I see why you stopped writing after Chpt 1.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great

Write more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Can't wait for the next part

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
a interesting start

I like how you set up the story, showing us a little bit of both characters lives, but still giving us a mystery. My main critic, is that the writing feels a little choppy. If you smooth out your writing style some, I can see this becoming a very interesting story.

the_pleasure_in_methe_pleasure_in_meabout 11 years agoAuthor
Just submitted a new chapter

I just submitted Chapter 01! I'm sorry for the delay but i can't submit until I'm happy with the results of my work =). I hope you'll enjoy it.

hugs and kisses

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

holy shit...That. Was. AMAZING!!!!!! good intro liked it alot want to see more plz

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Can't find other story

I have looked for the other story by 'Jennifer Lynn' that a few people mentioned. I have not be able to find it. Can some one give the exact author name and title?

While some folks have stolen stories, I think it more common for people to just think alike, especially if the starting idea is the same. There are no new ideas out there, just different ways to put them together. It would be helpful if the author could see the story you are talking about so she CAN make her's unique.

I find this story interesting and hope the author continues.

sammers2008sammers2008about 11 years ago
so good

Can't wait for more

DazzlerazzleDazzlerazzleabout 11 years ago

I really liked it!! Please add more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
wow..

Next chapter please...make it longer if possible! I really liked it :)

taravladetaravladeabout 11 years ago
more please

it had me reaching for the next button hopefully it will not be to long till the next installment

Speedy1106Speedy1106about 11 years ago
Good

Hope to see more soon.

panda1870panda1870about 11 years ago
awesome !

I like it alot. I will absolutely be reading more ;)

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 11 years ago
Really great start.

I am definitely interested in reading more. Your English is very good and aside from a few technically correct but oddly put together phrases, I would not have known English isn't your first language.

Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Your own story? seems like you copied Jennifer Lynns and made subtle changes, felt like I'd read it before the whole way through, so come up with something original or don't write at all.

peachesgirlpeachesgirlabout 11 years ago
Great Start

I loved it. For your first submission I think you did really well. I can tell a little that English is not your first language, I think it may be the way you phrase certain things. If you plan to continue you may want to look into getting a beta to help you with the language barrier. I think it was a good build, and I hope you have another chapter in the works.

FA_JFFA_JFabout 11 years ago
wonderful start

First, this is wonderful writing, especially if English is not your first language. I would suggest keeping that note at the start of each chapters. You will gain new readers each chapter and it will help them to know that. :)

I haven't read the other story mentioned. If you can find it, I think it would be helpful to read it to ensure the uniqueness of your story. She does seem precocious for four, but if she was an only child with attentive parents that is very possible. Also, the future mate of the future alpha would need to be special. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
thank you for commenting on similarities of the story

You should do it your way the book was good and you should but go your way as I Said I will continue to read

Renee

MaynessMaynessabout 11 years ago

Good start, I don't think the way Jade reacted was unforgivable! The only change I would make, should you revisit this prologue, is the dialogue between her and Oliver, it was a bit old or a four year old! Really enjoyed it, looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you.

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedabout 11 years ago

Great start can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
wow!

That was a good start.

the_pleasure_in_methe_pleasure_in_meabout 11 years agoAuthor
Hello everyone, thank you for the feed back

I'm working on the first chapter already, I didn't submit it yet because every time I re-read it I always find things that need to be changed (always for the better), I'm trying to make it a longer chapter and I wanted to see how the prologue would be received. but it's on its way!

about Jade's age, yes, you are right, most children would cry and give themselves away but if Jade were a common child the tale would end there, I think you can forgive that can you? =)

as for the similarities to a tale with the same name that I had no idea existed (my bad, poor research) I think they end here, I read the book synopsis and the next chapter will lead us in a different direction. Should I read the book to avoid more similarities? or maybe just because it is good? Thanks a lot once again for reading, voting and giving me your feedback about the story. hugs and kisses.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
more!!

Hurry up and make the sequel already! Great start. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
this is almost to the t like that Jennifer Lynn story raised by wolves same name too

I dont know if thats where you got the ideal but its almost tge same story same age same thing happened with the parents and the rouge woof writing saying he be back. I will be back for more but I hope

this I'd not the same and just made some stuff different

Renee

donaldedonaldeabout 11 years ago
excellent start

very enjoyable start to your tale I can not wait to read more. Please post more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Age

Hey!! Great start, as I was reading though it seemed to me this little girl should be a little older than 4- I have a 4 year old and I know they are all different but I have a hard time imagining my lil one having thought processes like this. She seems 6-8 more than 4 to me. I like what you have going though, keep it up!! Looking forward to more. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good Start

I like this chapter, provides interesting possibilities for future development. I also agree with the previous positive comments. I like stories for the story. The erotic aspects are vapid without a good solid story to develop the characters and such. Hope to read more of this tale.

angelicbeautyangelicbeautyabout 11 years ago

Great start and ending. I DEFINITELY love how it all rolls together and j can't wait to read more. There is a nice smoothness and flow keep it up

chinaxshopchinaxshopabout 11 years ago
more

good start cant wait for next chapter

FlpantherFlpantherabout 11 years ago
Nice!

Good first start..I encourage you to keep going. I hope you stay focused on your story and not get side tracked with providing gratuitous sex scenes. Additionally, I encourage you to reach out to someone on this site to help in editing your work. Bravo!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
awsome

Doesn't matter how long the chapters are as long as you continue in a timely fashion. I know life happens just keep updating your profile so we know you haven't forgotten us. This was a massive cliff hanger. Love it!

BigDog167BigDog167about 11 years ago
Very nice.

A good start and I am looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More!!!

We need more, FABULOUS start!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Oh i like this. Its well written great first submission.

Littlecat76Littlecat76about 11 years ago
Great start

This is a great intro, can't wait to see where you take it but people, including me, will want longer chapters going forward! Keep up the good work!

TrellyWellDoItWellTrellyWellDoItWellabout 11 years ago
oooooooohhhhhh........

I love this. Great start. I already love Thomas bad ass. Lol can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work ツ

Wildman28Wildman28about 11 years ago
shows promise

Interesting start to this series. Looking forward to how u develop it.

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