- Incest/Taboo
- Shipwrecked
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Click hereWhen she awoke, her son was on his back. His hands gripped his daughter's hard nipples. He twisted and pulled on them eliciting squeals and groans from his daughter. Cynthia was straddle him impaled on his cock. Her slim ass rose and fell rhythmically, her face a study in lust. She glanced over, saw her mother watching and blushed.
"We decided to try some things while you rested."
"Good child! Good!"
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The Allens were stranded on the desert island for nearly a year. Early in that year Annabelle succumbed to her illness. Before she died, she continued instructing her daughter in how to please her father. Barton and Cynthia buried her in the jungle shaded by the trees.
Barton was resourceful. Though a basic subsistence, he and his daughter survived until a passing ship saw their signal fire. They were taken aboard with much hoopla.
Back at home, there was sadness for the loss of the crew and Annabelle Allen. They also lamented the death of the man Cynthia Allen met and married aboard ship. He was also lost at sea, leaving her and her father to care for her infant child. The townspeople often remarked on the devotion they showed each other and the child.
They never heard the passionate moans at night as Father and daughter explored the mysteries of the Kama Sutra. A few tongues wagged when they decided to visit the island where Cynthia was born. There were rumors of impropriety. They were scandalous intimations that Cynthia was again pregnant. However, they were silenced by the displeasure of their neighbors and Barton Allen's business partners. His wealth was significant. Incurring his displeasure could adversely affect the economic well being of the village.
- COMMENTS
The Victorian era began in 1837 and ended in 1901, and the Civil War began in 1861. The Victorian era wasn't even at its halfway point yet.
Sooo many things wrong with it. all previously stated be other readers. If you really want to be a writer I suggest you research better and get and editor...sorry if it sounds too harsh but it constructive criticism. Learn from it...⭐️⭐️
You say this story is set after the Victorian Era and just before the Civil War. The Civil War was from 1861-1865. The Victorian Era ran from 1837-1901.
Your geography is a little messed up, but others have already made you aware of that. I have a problem, in a general way, of what people call a 'desert island'. The islands that most stories take place on, where humans can survive with plant and animal life, are not at all desert. They are uninhabited islands, not desert islands. If they had once been populated and are no longer, they could be called deserted islands, but still would not be desert. I think you probably discarded the rest of the story precipitously and should have reconsidered keeping it. You also need a proofreader. The incest is good. There was no unwelcome advances, their growing intimacy was very organic. Cynthia and her Father are becoming intimate in a totally different setting, though they seem to be just as dedicated to one another. The Victorian notion that Men are naturally polygamous and Women are naturally monogamous is very true. In a largely Christian world, this is taught in the Bible beginning with Genesis. It is a attitude that would solve many of the world's problems if it were widely accepted
Why would you kill off the mother at the end and ruin a really nice tale?