All Comments on 'Temptation Island'
by chubber
- 17 Comments
10 big Blazing stars for fun read. So realistic story of converting a moral wife into a black cock slut. Good effort. Buster2U
Very hot story, some lines definitely reminded me of the first sight, touch, stroke, suck and fuck with a well hung black man. I'm looking forward to the second part! I'm pretty sure it's going to read like the hot trip to Jamaica with my BFF years ago while the husbands were minding our kids back in Chicago.
Good story! The only thing I found wrong with this story was "waste" is spelled 'waist." Keep writing.
Wonder what Jono would think if hubby woke up and slipped a knife between his ribs a few times Then cut his appendage off and stuffing it as a reminder to his wife what happens to idiots that do wrong
Great story. I hope you write a sequel about Heather's next trip to the resort with her sister.
I really enjoyed the story but I could have used more build before the sex. There was some, but it was in short little flashbacks that didn't fully do it for me. Still a 5/5 for me though.
Oooh, this is a nice hot story with some of the usual white wife and BBC but otherall a very enjoyable vicarious experience this Sunday morning. Interestingly, our last reunion most of my friends admitted to having sex with a black guy not in college but 15+ years into their marriage, hmm, no regrets or divorces as I recall. His charming accent seduced me and we canoodled most of that afternoon and a few others too, if you must know... 18 years in.
Great story. Hoping for more parts. Maybe be another trip in this island, alone, doing anal and group sex. And obviously, another sroty with her and her sister. Maybe accepting the risk of being both pregnants after a group sex party.
I enjoyed this story and look forward to reading more of your work. You paint wonderful images with your words.
Like it! Reminded me of trip to Bahamas with wife, she eyed up a lot of dark skin and showed off her ample chest.