- Romance
- The Hunt Pt. 02
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All Comments on 'The Hunt Pt. 02'
by m_storyman_x
- 9 Comments
That dinner date was so erotic, well done! I read erotica because it is so stimulating, much more so than a lot of commercial porn, you delivered big time, I can see them teasing each other as the sex ramps up. And with Devon just in the background as a voyeur and sometimes participant, Wow.
Very hot. These two seem great together, and horny little Devon is a hot addition as well.
I'm surprised that you didn't have Devon work her way into getting some real dick from Roger instead of settling for the cucumber. From Devon's dialog while she was using the cucumber, she's got the hots for Roger just like Amy and Francine. Maybe you should consider putting a "harem" tag on this? 🤔 4/5 because Roger doesn't spend the night and do Devon too.
Best way to have a dinner date and would love to play the game of see what cums next. You tell a story in a good way, keep up the story.
This beautifully written romance story definitely needs to be continued. The reader is really drawn into the story, because the characters are so well-defined. The dreamy atmosphere is compelling, but the ending leaves the reader yearning to find out what happens next. Five stars.
I think Erotic Couplings would have been a better category, at least so far. Excellent!