by Originsunknown
Sequel movie? Real brother and sister sex movie with confirmed impregnating! Then they can live as husband and wife!
Nah, not my style
You authors always make making porn so easy, go with the flow stuff.
We all know it isn’t. It is hard difficult work done in short scenes, stop go all the time, to get the right shot and angle together with lighting.
You don’t just go along have your usual 7 to minute fuck and go home. These shoots take hours and hours of hot lights and boredom.
Also, porn stars are a dime a dozen and the money is not stellar, often one has to supply your own clothing ,makeup and props. The producers do precious little.
That and for other reasons you get 1/5 for perpetuating the porn fantasy.
How do I know?
Two of my sons dated porn actresses. They spoke of their shoots and what was involved.
My sons moved on, but the three girlls are still in the business, tho getting older and having to do more and more extras to get jobs.
Surprise, surprise, they cannot keep partners, funnily, no one wants to take them home to meet mom, wonder why.
2/5
A very well written story and so on par with today's world. The sex was hot as well.
If you're gonna mentions small details like receiving/drinking a glass of water. You should add a sentence or 2 about talent testing. No set will see talents performing without recent pass test nevermind doing a creampie scene. Normally wouldnt be an issue if was just another brother/sister story. However if youre gonna write about the adult industry and detail the setup for the scene then include the testing aspect. Otherwise was a good story and interested to read further chapters
Have you heard the term, Artistic License? Like pretty much all of my stories, I try and stick to the reality that I have created within my story. My characters can cook bacon naked without getting splashes, swap bodies with another person and much more. I try not to bore with the banality of most things in real life, I'm not writing 20 page technical manuals on the intricacies of quantum physics, I write to arouse and that's it. Sorry it didn't meet your requirements, maybe end with 'nah, not my style' and leave it at that. Or not, vote how you want, we all have our own tastes but I won't apologize for not being 100% accurate on an industry I'll never be in...
Good story. Will definitely read some more of your fantasies (this was my first sample). I personally read this stuff for pleasure not technical content. Don't need all the setups, lighting and scene changes. You did just fine.
I would also like a sequel but doubt you have that in mind.
Cheers
SAGE
Love the premise and details leading up to the poetic final statement, “Curve balls” and all. 5* and looking forward to reading your other submissions.