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Little longer
Your chapters are too short to get involved fully into your story. Chapters 1 and 2 should be combined to make one chapter. This will let your reader become more involved in your story.
Great start but, need longer chapters
The story has great potential but, is moving at a really slow pace. As you said sissies beg so please get the next chapter out and make it longer.
Great Story
I thoroughly enjoyed your story can’t wait to read what happens next.
Perfect start.
Amazing first two chapters. You make them however long you want but please release more. You were just getting to the good parts, this series has endless potential and is so perfectly spot on with any panty boys fantasy. Thank you.
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