All Comments on 'When a Plan Comes Together'
by miss_D_mena
- 9 Comments
Brilliant story.
I attempted to give 5 stars but my finger pressed 4 stars by mistake.
Favourited as well
Good work.
Nice, i could see where it was going but it still kept me interested in exactly how we would get there.
Great, sister is kind of a bitch, but it worked out. You need one more chapter when they are swapping & the women make the guys fuck each other !
Hi Miss D Mena
As ever enjoyed your story. Only 8 new stories this year, is it getting harder or are you just busy with other things?
Parts of the story were great, but at the end, I didn't like the continued dishonesty. The only way they have a chance at not imploding is communication. Adding another secret between the women just indicates it's going to melt down and brought the rest of the story down.