by SandmanNC
did she earn enough for medical bills and other cost including possible pregnancy? 1*
"sucked six cocks and had three guys fuck you" yet he only get sloppy leftovers. Why is he worried if she cums or not; the whores pleasure is not relevant. I note that she does not want him thinking (let alone fucking) another woman, Alexis.
I ask what she can do to pay him back? Bring in 6 hot babes for him to fuck?
Ignore the two comments above. Why would they read a story in this category when they obviously hate the subject matter. I thought it was well written and hot. Give us the story from Atlantis.
If you don't like comments like those, don't post stories like this where you know you'll get them!
Once he lets his wife suck another mans cock, their marriage is toast. She can catch any and all of the diseases out there by that one action. She's obviously turned on by the whole idea. It won't be long until she wants to fuck the men in the clubs. Her idea will be to go to a different club to avoid any recognition or repeat customers. Soon she'll be traveling all over, stripping and fucking. Beyond stupid.
1 star
I wish my wife had the guts to try it!
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I can’t believe how fucked in the head these jerks are who think it’s fun to post their shit on these stories are. Definitely a couple brick shy of a load. Delete them and let us all enjoy these stories in peace.
A sordid little story about a couple doing something really dumb. Rather badly written too, the sentence structure was ill-considered and there was much too much use of 'I'; but the spelling was good.
I’d love to try it, particularly th VIP stuff. Xoxoxo Annette
The only worthwhile purpose in writing a story with such an ignorant, moronic MC is the growth that results in the loss of that ignorance. That is the obstacle to overcome and the lure in reading about one. Somehow, I get the feeling this dumb cuck is just going to glory in his non growth and enjoy cultivating STDs from her numerous johns.
I'm out.
1*
...who have fucked up chromosomes are the idiots who whine like little bitches on a porn site. Good story.
Had I known it was this much fun I would have given it a try. Where is this club?
I was so looking forward to the rest of the week! Especially Saturday night!! Loved the story very well told, thanks
You said strip club adventures but she only went in for one day. So just a small mistake there. I think the description of the experience was a bit robotic. Lacked passion, but was alright.
I am v disappointed in the finish where you changed things to have our heroine not going back to the club for the rest of the week. Such a pity. Story had possibilities... ken
A good story, but had it been my wife, I would have encouraged her to go back. I enjoyed hearing her experiences with the other men, and would have wanted to hear about the the other days, especially the activity on Saturday night. You could have made this a yearly pilgrimage, but now she is is banned from the club.
There was no reference to any rehearsal for dancing, and the wife stripped nude for her husband immediately. Also the wife allowed great liberty to too many clients too easily.
I doubt if there are any clubs that allow so much freedom to their strippers.
The idea for the story is great, but the progression to full sex was too fast. Surely she would have eased her way into this experience more gradually.
Yes I agree that it would have been better if she completed the full week.
Super story that could be so much better.
An abrupt ending and would have been good to play it out for the week. Also agree that the title is a bit misleading and should be something along the lines of Wife’s prostitution adventure...
Just another sick fantasy. Any man would want his wife to be.a stripper and a whore for random low lifes.
AS a HOT fantasy/fiction/stroker this story certainly has the old tool pointing North! BUT,if thought about in reality,WTF?! Hubby is OK with his wife sucking,swallowing and fucking an assortment of pervs who wander into a strip club?! ( Prior to arriving at the club,most had probably pissed in one of those disgusting gas station crappers where you slide in on one foot.) I have to wonder why many of the patrons were singing,"The Shrimp Boats Are Coming" as Scuzzy the wife exited the club with her oozing cunt being buzzed by flies. Dopey Hubby sure had his work cut out for him as he had to slurp her nasty soup at the Y when she returned.(Christ,he probably needed a knife and fork instead of a soup spoon!)
I am not sure why people read the loving wives category and then comment about how much they hate these stories.
Anyway, I thought the idea was hot and worked well for a fantasy. I liked the Monte Carlo story better as it had a more loving and mutual experience. But, entertaining.
I'm a professional author of erotic fiction and I think your stories are well-formed, well-written, and interesting. I liked this story and found it sexy, just like I found "Monte Carlo" sexy. I have not experienced a marriage as open as the one portrayed, but I thought your plot, characters, reactions and scenes believable, warm, and loving in a unique way. I would only find fault in the abruptness of the ending - as I felt with "Monte Carlo." I wish she had continued her stripping experience through the whole week. Even more, I would have liked another 10 pages of their deeper REACTION to what happened. I think there was much of interest yet to convey, including her evolution, as well as his. Change is good.. Anyway, without reservation, I vote a 5-star. Well done. Worth a follow-up story for sure.
I thought it was a hot story and that she was open and honest with her husband about how it made her feel. I think some have criticized her decision to not complete the week, but it seemed more in character with her Monte Carlo story where they played together and then didn’t do it again. I think it might have worked better if she didn’t do the extras and just got hot doing stage and lap dances then fucked the husbands brains out.
Good story. I still like Monte Carlo better.