All Comments on 'After Dad left Pt. 01'

hope we get to some taboo stuff soon though

Not a bad start. Maybe make it a little longer to develop the main characters so the readers will be interested enough to look for chapter 2. Overall, I saw only one mistake where you left a word out. It did not take away from the story and I enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to seeing where you take this, their experiences and discoveries. Thanks for your time and imagination.

It has possibilities

Please tell me he ends up eating another mans cum out of his mom😍

This story is very short and I don’t see how it fits into the incest category, also who is the other person you mentioned in the opening. I would read the next chapter if it is longer and goes into more detail. Keep writing it was easy to read with only a few mistakes.

You have both glaring grammar and spelling issues.

The story, so far, gave little hint of an incest based story. Many readers pick a story to read, based on its category. To keep the reader’s interest, at the very least, give hints of what is to come.

Not much to it and no incest just a 3