All Comments on 'An Orc's Slave Ch. 13'
by simmaster
- 22 Comments
I hope you will take care of your problems and come back to us with more bologas fatt BitchBreaker :D
Stockholm syndrome! Yes! Exactly what I wanted! Keep up the work! And return soon! I hope he goes into a town with the Orc! Completely naked. And dosnt are cause he is with his master! Maybe some public sex!
What if Ebba turned into his sex slave being forced by the orc! He commands ebba. And the orc commmands him. And at one point they have a threesome!
i love the story. please write more. i hope the orc gets what she wants in the end.
More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More!
By far my fav story on this whole site, and the only story that makes me care for the characters, thank you.
Def one of the best stories around here, this latest chapter felt kinda out of character though. Bologna forgave Tommy on a whim in 2 seconds, and he forgot about his freedom just as quick. Also her finding him after he had bumped his head in a forest was very very convenient and Deus Ex Machina'd. Kinda wish you'd rewrite it, cause it's fucking stupid. Maybe also introduce other dickgirl charachters, And Tommy not chatting at all with Edna is a bit of a let-down, since she seems like a one-dimensional character, with potential.
On a side note: Bologna having fully Audible and comprehensible memoir paragraphs about her tragic past, whilst being asleep and ducked off, was rea-hea-hea-eally dumb. Otherwise, amazing
This series has me wishing I was in thomas's place taking that huge orc cock up my ass and stretching my pussy!!! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!
Personally, I would like to see an ending with Ebba.
Possibly a final fight between Ebba and Bolagal. With Thomas being the deciding factor. Having to choose between them. After all, his plan was to get on her good side and finally escape. Now he can! With. Unlimited sex with a beautiful woman and lots of money! Just a thought haha.
But please, do not let this be the final installment.
Not going to lie, originally I just came for a quick read. But now I am invested in this story. Well done.
You could always write two endings, one were he claims his freedom and the girl he escaped with (it's been a while and I was just checking in to see if you made more chapters) and one where he chooses the Orc and becomes a powerful bandit leader himself and or a powerful assistant
I've seen many stories on here, and this is one of the very best I've seen. I sure hope you continue. Im not gonna give any advice or suggestions on where the story should go like I've seen others do. Because this is your story, and needs I come from your mind. Hope to read more soon. Keep up the great work.
I hope you continue this series, your style is amazing in keeping the reader interested.
Don't want to tell you how to continue but I would love to see another Shemale Orc who gives Bologal competition over Thomas
Hi. I don't know if you are still active but If you are, could you please continue this story!