by daemonrunner
This is my kind of erotica. Sexy as hell but also a great story. Every story has its slow spots. Places used to build the characters and expand the story. If I'm not mistaken that is what this chapter does. It was a good place to do this before the story picks back up. I can't wait for the next chapter
Great chapter, I am all in on this one for sure. I can't wait to see what the story is with mom and dad.
Looking forward to seeing the mother getting involved. Maybe she'd be more of a submissive freak to Freddy.
Cool story.. ,,,, wondering how dad and mom play in this story. How about allie's parents. How do they feel about Freddy?
Very enjoyable read so far. My only complaint is at certain points it's too detailed on things that are really not needed. Look forward to many more installments.
When will he meet Allie's parents and how will he get on with her mother? Still enjoyable and getting better as you continue.