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Click hereDad slammed on the brakes and said, in a panic, "You okay?"
Tanya snapped, so unlike her, "I told you to warn us if you were going to hit a bump."
"Sorry," Dad said in the tone usually used for when he pissed off mom. "Should I pull over?" Dad asked, going at a snail's pace now.
"No!" Tanya replied resolutely.
"Okay," Dad replied, in the way dad's reply when they know another word could end their life at the hands of an overreacting female.
Mom, being the peacemaker, asked, "Are you guys okay back there?"
"We're fine," Tanya said, as she began, much to my surprise, slowly riding my cock.
"Yeah, just keep driving and get us there," I added, trying to act casual, even as I was in awe that my cute sister was losing her virginity willingly... to me.
I just sat there and enjoyed the pleasure of Tanya slowly riding my cock, as I gently rubbed her back.
"Mmmmm," she let out as she took my entire cock back into her wetness.
I whispered, "Take your time."
She nodded, as she again closed her eyes.
God, I wished I could see her face clearly. I wished I could see her naked body as she rode me.
Wanting to be more a part of this surreal moment, I leaned forward and cupped both her breasts... wishing she wasn't wearing a bra.
As if reading my mind, she stopped riding me, again sitting completely on my lap and moved my hands away... at first I was disappointed, but that was short lived as she lifted up her shirt, unclasped her bra and tossed it to the ground.
I returned my hands, this time under her shirt, to her breasts and traced over her incredible hard nipples.
Her body trembled at my gentle touch, even as she resumed slowly riding me.
God, I wanted to suck those big tits... those hard nipples.
I was brought out of my lustful thoughts, as Dad warned, "Rough patch coming."
"Thanks for the warning," Tanya said, as she lifted her ass up, holding onto Dad's chair, looked back at me and mouthed, "Fuck me, big brother."
I didn't hesitate, as I moved my hands for balance away from those perfect tits and began slowly bucking my ass up.
This time she looked at me throughout, which only enhanced the intensity of the moment. Pushing it past just being sex to something else... something I couldn't explain... couldn't rationalize.
"Faster," she mouthed, just as the car began to vibrate from the roughness... which made me think back to the washing machine.
Although awkward, I tried to oblige. I wanted her first time to be perfect... memorable. I couldn't explain it... I was no virgin... but I felt like this was my first time.
And maybe it was... this was the first time I was fucking someone I loved... and that was the moment I realized...this wasn't just sex... I loved my sister and although I had never considered it until now... I loved her as more than just a sister.
As if thinking something similar, she leaned back and kissed me, my entire cock again being lodged deep inside my sister.
It was soft and tender.
But sparks erupted through my very being.
Our tongues explored each other's mouth, as I again reached around with my free right hand and cupped her breast.
When she broke the kiss, she looked into my eyes with such vulnerability and lust that I loved her even more... so much that it confused me. Could I love my sister in a way that was more than just siblings?
She smiled and whispered, "I love you."
"I love you too," I replied, warmth coursing through my entire body at the words other girls had said to me and I lied in return... this time I meant it. This was more than just fucking... this was something else... something organic... something perfect.
"Now fuck the hell out of me," she said, the words sounding so hot and nasty coming from her sweet lips.
"Yes, ma'am," I nodded, as I put my hands on her hips, lifted her up and began fucking her, trying to be both quiet and aggressive... which was quite a challenge.
"Yes," Tanya moaned, louder than she anticipated.
"What, honey?" Mom asked.
Covering quickly, even as I kept fucking her, she answered, "Just got a text that Sarah finally dumped that loser Dave."
"Oh, okay," Mom said.
For a couple of minutes, I fucked her as best I could in the awkward position I was in.
It felt so amazing, yet I couldn't get into a rhythm.
Tanya then sat down on my lap and began riding me.
I groaned as she began bouncing on my cock, the sounds of our bodies colliding covered by the radio and the loud sounds of gravel underneath the car.
My balls began boiling, and it was clear Tanya was getting close.
She was biting her lips.
Her eyes were closed.
And she was riding me as fast as she could as she again grabbed onto Dad's chair.
"You okay, honey?" Dad asked, feeling his chair pulled back.
"Never better," she answered.
"Only about thirty minutes left," he said.
"Okayyyyy," she replied, her orgasm close, another bump on the road able to hide the real intent of her moan.
"Sorry," Dad said.
"Oh, I'm getting used to being bounced around," she quipped, which made me gasp slightly at the wicked double entendre
"I'm sorry," Dad said.
Mom offered, "I could replace you back there, Tanya."
I smirked at the reality of what Mom was unknowingly offering.
Tanya replied, as she slammed down on my cock, looking back at me with a wicked smile, "I'm not sure you could handle the pounding I'm taking back here."
Oh fuck! God, my sister was wickedly hot.
"You sure?" Mom asked. "I don't mind the bumps."
"It's okay, Mom. I'm finally in the perfect position."
"Me too," I added.
"Okay," Mom said. "But if you want to swap positions just let me know."
"Okay," Tanya smirked at me, before asking, "are you comfortable with your sister on your lap?"
"I'm handling it okay," I said.
Then she resumed riding me. Grinding her ass on me. Fucking herself.
I began bucking my ass up to meet her downward bounces and reached around and began rubbing her swollen clit, which made Tanya gasp, "Ohhh, God, shit."
Mom said, "Pull over, Frank," which made me stop.
"No, no, keep going," she demanded with a tone that said don't you dare stop. I wasn't sure if it was aimed at me or Dad, but Dad didn't pull over, although he did slow down as I kept fucking her.
"We need to stop." Mom repeated. "They are obviously not comfortable."
"Keep driving," Tanya repeated, "I'm so close."
"What?" Mom asked, as she moved a box to look back at us.
"She means we're so close, let's just get there," I covered for her, as Tanya stopped just in time to not get caught riding me.
""Oh, okay," Mom said, looking at us with a perplexed look.
To my surprise, Mom moved the box back to hide us and Tanya resumed riding me.
I wondered if Mom knew.
Tanya didn't seem to care.
I no longer cared either as I was close to eruption.
Tanya covered her mouth and I watched her come... and then felt it... as she collapsed on my cock, her juice leaking onto me.
I hadn't come yet.
But I didn't care.
I wanted her to enjoy her first fuck.
Then she surprised me again after a couple of minutes of recovery.
She got off my cock, moved to the side and took my cock in her hand.
She began stroking me and moving around, so her back was against Dad's seat. She leaned her head down trying to suck me, but couldn't reach in the confined space.
Realizing what she wanted to do and realizing that it was definitely what I wanted her to do, I moved up so I was on my knees, my head having to crane awkwardly against the roof as I was too tall. It was enough though for Tanya to be able to take my cock in her mouth.
She bobbed furiously, tasting herself on my dick, which only made the surreal session even more so.
I wasn't going to last long, her mouth like heaven.
And in under a minute... I shot my load in her mouth.
Unfortunately, I couldn't warn her and thus she wasn't ready for the excessive load I shot into her mouth.
She gagged and my second rope hit her dead in the face just as Mom moved the box again and witnessed my third rope splatter her daughter.
Mom didn't say a word... just watched in shock... as one last rope shot out of me and onto my cute sister.
I looked at Mom, who was staring down at her son's dick and her daughter's cum coated face with a look that was completely unexplainable.
It wasn't anger as one would expect.
It wasn't even completely shock.
Tanya had no idea Mom was watching as she leaned forward and took my cock back in her mouth.
Mom finally looked up at me.
I didn't know what to do.
So I shrugged.
Dad asked, "Everything okay back there?"
"Never better," I said, still with no idea what Mom was thinking.
Tanya took my cock out of her mouth as she added, oblivious that Mom was watching, "I'm persevering."
Tanya leaned forward and licked my cock one more time, before I slid back down and watched as Tanya scooped the cum off her face and put it into her mouth, smiling at me the entire time.
Tanya then began to move back onto my lap, putting my still hard cock back in her pussy, just as Mom moved the box back in position after glancing down at my cock one last time.
My head was spinning.
Both of them.
Mom didn't freak out.
Mom definitely looked down at my dick before moving the box back.
I shook my head at how this surreal, amazing day just got even stranger.
The next twenty minutes, we didn't say a word. Just enjoyed the afterglow of an amazing intimate moment between siblings.
Dad announced, "We're here."
I leaned forward and whispered, "That was amazing."
She nodded, as she leaned back into me and ground her cunt on my cock one last time.
Once stopped, Tanya quickly opened the door and got off of me before Dad could see.
I quickly put my cock away, but noticed a pretty large wet stain on my crotch area. That was going to be impossible to hide.
I got out, and Dad said to the two of us, "So you survived."
Tanya, shocking me one more time, replied, "Yes, it was quite the ride."
Feeling my face go red this time, I quickly went around to the other side to grab a box that would hide the evidence.
Mom was out of the car too by the time I went to the other side to grab one of the boxes from the backseat.
She asked, her tone dripping with innuendo, "Did you enjoy the ride too?"
I had no idea what to say.
Thankfully, Dad was behind me and he asked, "Are you going to grab a box or what?"
I grabbed a box and took it into grandma's house.
Dad said, "Put it on the front step and go grab the last one."
"Sure, Dad," I nodded, making sure to shift my body so he wouldn't somehow see my wet crotch.
I went back to the car and saw Mom was talking to Tanya.
Fuck!
I reached the car to hear Mom say, "And you still have your brother's cum in your hair."
The End... for now... perhaps.
I'm not sure if this story should continue... or not. Almost every time I think it should and write a part 2 I am wrong (See Dominican Slut or Cocksucker), although I was write having written the complete six part Cheerleader Mom series at once.
Anyways, if continued I imagined everyone eventually getting involved... thus the main title Family Affair.
Some ideas include:
FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY
Mom decides she needs a ride on her son's big cock.
FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME
Son pleases Mom & Sister while Dad is away.
FAMILY AFFAIR: DAD TAKES DICK TOO
While fishing, son learns dad loves dick too.
FAMILY AFFAIR: LEZ CUNT MUNCH
Mom and daughter don't need men.
FAMILY AFFAIR: ORGY
A heavy storm leads to fun in the tent.
FAMLY AFFAIR: SWAPPING TENTS
Mom & Daughter swap tents.
Please leave your thoughts... or maybe this a stand-alone story.
Jasmine June 2016
As always... thanks for reading....
Love Jasmine
- COMMENTS
Sign me up for “ FAMILY AFFAIR: DAD TAKES DICK TOO” and “ FAMLY AFFAIR: SWAPPING TENTS” with some family ignorance thrown in. Keep dad ignorant of this hook-up, and keep mom/daughter ignorant of dad/son. For the tent swapping, have mom/daughter plot it, without the son/dad knowing. Just lots of incest driven scheming. I know you already did mother/son but that’s my least favorite of all possible matches.
Very hot. I like how the mother eventually saw the action at the end. I fucked my older sister in the back of a boat during a party. I didnt cum in her afraid of getting her pregnant. I wished that I did. It was the best fuck that I ever had.
Do the whole series. I want to drain my balls some more. Just the titles made me hard.
Just keep writing ANY sequel chapters!!! You Write...We Will Read Them, you know this!!
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Loved it, I'm still licking my cum off my hands and stomach. May read it again any one need a good blow job . Contact me with # Virgin Boi Pussy 🍑
Finish this one . Mom does say anything, dad never finds out , mom and sister fucks son/ brother
Love the story don't know if your still active, or even if it is continued elsewhere. But I would like FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY for a next part then
FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME after that then
FAMLY AFFAIR: SWAPPING TENTS for the big finish
one of the first stories i read when i first found this site read some of ur others such a powwerrful effect
'I wasn't sure if it was aimed at me or Dad,' Out of context, just an innocent centence. In context one of the most hilarous sentences ever. Fife stars for the sentence alone.
On the other side I would like to know what mother really made of the situation.
Loved the story although I've read others with a similar theme of fucking in the back seat.
I enjoyed reading mom witness the finish.
There'd be no way to actually pull off sex in the back without the scent of the sex coupling wafting forward. Nice fantasy though.
4 stars from me.
Very hot and I'm glad that you wrote the next part "Bathroom Mommy". I look forward to reading it and I hope there will be more in the future.
OMG, Jasmine!!!!!!!! That was absolutely awesome. I came so hard as I got to the part where Tanya took control of the fucking and was riding her brother. The whole story was excellent, and I am hoping you will continue it. You already have a start for the next chapter, when you had Phillip's mom see his cock. Mom seeing that huge cock, makes her want to take it for a ride. You have several possible future chapters listed, so PLEASE, PLEASE continue the story. I look forward to hearing more from you. Love Wayne
I loved it. Not sure about dad raking dick too. I think it'd be better to keep dad oblivious. But definitely fuck Mom.
Nagyon tetszett, kérlek folytasd a történetet anyával is kell baszni mert látta milyen szép faszod van.
This was the dumbest story I've ever read. Fucking your virgin in the car with your parents in the front seat? And then having your mom see your sister get covered in cum? That's so fucking stupid
Jasmine, As a fellow writer, but of poetry and a recent novel, you artful words left me wanting more, so I will surely read on here and sample your other stories. Bravo. JEF
I was hoping that he would cum inside of his sister, so he could show her what its like to feel hot seman being ejaculated inside of her pussy. Although it really doesn't matter, I would have liked it more if Tanya had been the oldest of the two. There's something about a older sibling, seducing a younger brother and getting pregnant by him
That would be great to see her reaction when she realizes that he is coming inside of her and she's not on any kind of birth control, and knowing that she is probably going to get pregnant by her brother
I absolutely loved the story. As I was reading it, I was hoping that he would cum inside of his sister and get her pregnant. There's nothing better than impregnation stories about father and daughter or brother and sister. Tanya sounds like she's a little hottie who would look even hotter with a baby bump
Love both ideas of mum getting some and swapping tents, who knows they might end up in the one tent
If it continues I want to be the cousin who spends Thanksgiving and is thankful for all the giving.
240. There were two similar stories that I have read so far: Backseat Mama and Back Seat Sister. These are all sexy and fun to read.
WOw....,.where the author could make more story's is unbelievable. Aunt, babies, at least 4 constant horny women, ect.
I cant believe I'm about to say this but please do:
FAMILY AFFAIR: DAD TAKES DICK TOO
Similar to another Backseat fucking trip, but very good. Although I like some of your suggestions, I think this could remain a onetime attraction.
I really liked it, if you had of explained how nice your sisters pussy and tits were and how hard and wet your cock was, anymore than you did, I would have tossed that box out and got down between you two and licked her pussy and sucked your cock.
I enjoyed the story quite a bit! Personally, i'm always a little disappointed when stories that hold my attentionn as well as this one dont end in unprotected creampies, but I recognize that just isnt everyones kink. In terms of follow up stories I love the "bathroom mommy" ( which i think has already been written at the time of this comment), "crazy threesome," and "swapping tents." Regardless, thanks for writing! Great story
Follow on with.
Son takes over driving.
Mom sits on dad's lap and rekindle their etc
Metta sisko ja minä nussimme kiimassa autossa maaseutumatkalla. Yövyimme hotellissa avioparina. Saimme nussia rauhassa.
I would like the 2nd part to be the brother-sister continuation.
weii done!
Well I am obviously late for voting and see mom in the bathroom won out. Perhaps the best choice , although I wasn’t sure escalation was called for and certainly not massive escalation to include everyone. But that’s my bias, Old Al’s father was such a total and complete “unfather” or antifather” or whatever, that ANYTHING involving the paternal side of the family is a toal turn off, and in one case was an amazingly effective emetic.
I will go read the next chapter, to see where it goes, simply because it is your story.
Al
Another great story. I have to say I'm really interested in seeing Dad takes dick. Please do it.
This was great!! A 2nd part, perhaps a bit shorter but telling what happened after the family's arrival would be most welcome!! Would mainly want the 2nd part to be the brother-sister continuation, perhaps ending (but their continuing!) back home.
Don't know when you wrote this, but it was really hot. Would love to see a sequel (if it's not all too late) either the Swapping Tents or crazy 3some; the swapping I like best. Loved the story.
What an exciting story, well written and it draws you in as if you are there! Love it. Keep em cumming!
I love this story! My 3rd read of it! And since I'm logged in Anonymous you got five stars 3 times from me. Really loved the hilarity as the end approached. This is the story that brought me to read all of your works. Thank you very much, Norman Cox
Okay, yes. This was hot and tender at the same time. While this was very similar to "Backseat Mommy" it was not tragic, dark and loveless (In my opinion). This was so much better. Oh, and there are many similar "sitting on a loved one's lap while riding" stories out there. Seems to be a popular theme. Well done. More please. 5 Stars
I vote for "Bathroom Mommy" and "Crazy threesome"
This story would have been much hotter if it wasn't just a re-write of 'Backseat Mommy', so it loses my 5* based on originality.
The story was good, but now I've got the hots for Jasmine!! Her writing style has got me standing to attention!!!
You definitely should write a sequel to this story where the brother and sister continue their romance.
Great story in all aspects. As much as I’m sure we’d all love a sequel, I don’t think one is necessary. The hints are enough and the fantasy it leaves in place is perhaps better than the reality. You know how it is: you write an epic starter and then everything to come after doesn’t quite seem to work. Leaving it to your readers’ imaginations is best.
I’d also like to point out that this seems to be the spiritual successor of a similar story about a mom bouncing on her son’s lap on a similar trip. So, for me, this story has been a long time coming.
- Aaron.
Definitely....You should continue!!! That was so hot I shot everywhere right at the same time, he shot his load all over Sis and Mom watched!
I love backseat stories.
Especially with brother and sister.
Keep the series going.
Can’t wait for the next chapter
Yes please add more to this story line I am sure mom would agree she needs some of what her son has
Loved the story and think maybe the next chapter could be the bathroom with mummy at grans or mummy could take the back seat on the way to the camp grounds.
okay what happens after dropping off boxes? they're on their way to go camping mom just found out what happens next? really should have a chapter 2 thinking mom wants some cock too the way she was looking maybe even wants to peak in the kids tent to watch again only this time being asked to join in.
This is not an uncommon theme and I have read many stories along this line.
Once you set the scene to make it interesting. The event but what happens next?
You have bitten into the apple, now what?
Thank you for an amazing story that made me wish it was me getting it on with my sister !! The intiment times of fucking with your parents so close by and then finding your mom knows !! Was there a possibility I could get it on with my mom ? My cock was hard all thru the story and as I said,,,, I wish it was me ° well done !! Well done !!
I really enjoy your stories. I became an exhibitionist and developed some of my kinks in a way that although much tamer makes your stories resonate. And make me painfully hard. Please write more
This was extremely well written and i love the story. I did see a grammatical/spelling error on the first page. Good job!
Please write all the sequels to this story!! I love it!!
with a happy ending (so far) but think an additional chapter would be nice, where the son gets to do his Mommy, but not in the car, and gets to finish doing his little sister. Thanx for another read.
Mom and son definitely need to get familiar with each other.
I just love your two page formats, more Please.
The sneaky nature of them fucking in the back seat was so hot, trying to be quiet when all your sense say to be loud!!! And then we his mom catches him cumming on his sister’s face is such a hot fantasy. I often fantasize about my wife walking in just as I cum on her friends face! I think part 2 would be great!! Maybe they end up staying at grandma’s a few days, dad has to take grandma to a dr’s appt and something happens when mom has a talk with her kids. Maybe she’s a closet voyeur and instructs and watches them, maybe at the end she takes her sons cock and jerks him till he cum on his sister again....
I love the mom and daughter switch places on the boy. Then mom and daughter tag-team him. If the dad is a cool kind of guy then let the daughter catch him jacking off or maybe skinny-dipping and get him. Then while he and daughter are busy one time, let mom join, then later while dad is doing daughter, mom and sin come in together and let it become a family orgy.
After that maybe the daughter has a friend or two with a hot mom and those women or maybe entire families could join in.
Mon should ride in the back on the trip back home...
...for boxes they can have someone at the campsite give them something to stash in the backseat
I really got into it. Wow. In my humble opinion, I think, and hope, you do continue this story. But, by the tone, I think brother and sister, intensely, should continue. Maybe mother listens in on brother and sister, masturbates and takes her passion to dad. Mother and daughter, with your good story-telling, yes. Son, sister and mother, yes. Dad, other than with over-heated mother (he loves it), no. Turning it into another boring, un-erotic family orgy story, would be a shame. This first story has heat, emotion, intelligence and humor. The sister, maybe confiding in a girlfriend is made aware of her bi-sexuality, experiments, likes it, shares friend with her brother... Forcing a sudden desire for her mother, on the sister, or the same for the brother, again, changes the great tone you started with. I know I'm a total nerd. Again, just my humble opinion.
Would have been even better if Tanya had let him cum in her pussy. Next time, maybe.....
man this story rocks! me and my gf got off to this togther thx. cant wait for the next one
Perhaps son and sister are forced to share a tent, mom is in the know and secretly listens in before accidentally being perved on by dad who takes her later only hinting at what he knows.
great story..amazing fantasy..yea..i think you should continue
shame this story is dead id have loved to see the son take the mom and daughter from the dad
Could definately do with a follow up chapter, love reading your stories
This is a great start of a beautiful story line, keep up the great work and I a looking forward to seeing more from this series!
Great story...a bit unrealistic that the Dad could be that clueless, but it's a fantasy after all! Good buildup!
Had to read again
Just as good the second time
Wish you had another EPISODE
Excellent writing. Love reading it. Mom curious would be nice sequel yes.
And keep it up. Don’t care if incest stories. It is fiction, but as said very good writing.
l always love these incest stories because its one of my fantasies,l want you to continue
I know it might be a little late but i want all the suggested ideas to become a continuation and idk y but i find this quirky shit fucking amazing!!! Even tho i dont want this to happen w/ me and my family but w/ my future boyfriend (im single as a fucking pringle rn) and his family!!! But this story is fucking fire and i got ne off soooo fucking good soo fucking fast sooo many fucking times and sooo fucking hard
I wish you would do a second chapter with MOM in the backseat. Maybe driving to Harvard to visit Tanya.
I know incest is illegal: However, I wonder how many times a Brother & Sister actually have sex and end up living together. Maybe not forever, but at least until they find their own special person. They develop a devotion and love to each other stronger than most marriages. I still enjoy these stories.
in an extremely confined space and the smell is not recognized by the parents? Get Real. You might as well having them moaning and screaming through their orgasms and the parents remain oblivious..
This was a very well written story. thank you for all you contribute to Lit.
I also missed this incest story, and glad I found it. wow it was erotic to read.
...till Now ! That was quite nice in a lots of ways ! The voyeur stuff and then the ride ! Nicely done !
The story they are referring to is yours.
Backseat Mommy: Long Hard Ride
I read it right before this one. Love both btw :D
This is not plagiarized at all
Please leave the link to prove your point... thanks
this story was almost word for word of another writer's story, except that it was the wife in the back with the son who was on their way taking him to college and it was just the dad, wife and son. the car was loaded the same way
In reality you could just continue as a series, this was a phenomenal read!
Could end up being an intimate romance between the siblings with some fringe benefits for mom with sister's permission. Keep dad out of it for awhile, then maybe slowly include him in when he finds them doing something where he can't be a single entity anymore.
Just keep him clueless let it be tween the sister Mom and son
I know these are just stories, but it should be look like a real situation.ths family should have a introduction and the characters should have their own personality.the chemistry between two characters must and should be shown clearly .
So all your continuing ideas are basically orgies? Looking at your work it does seem ALL your stories end up that way.
Well I am a sucker for romance, so why not challenge yourself and keep it to just the siblings.
The sister to going to college and the brother has a dead end job but smarts, not unrealistic to think he could cram his way into the same one. The mother knowing instead of dragging her into it can instead help convince the father to let them have their own apartment.
Cliche yes but considering this entire story is recycled from Backseat Mommy I see you are not afraid of using them.
A sequel would be great to turn it into a romance rather than just a steamy encounter, but please stick to the siblings, or at the very least Do Not include the dad that would be a big turnoff.
The story of Tanya and her older brother deserves to be played out beyond the back seat of the family car. More please between the two siblings before introducing other family members. 5-stars!
Well done! There is so much potential for future stories in this family. Doing Mom on the way home or a lengthy side trip. Turning sis and Mom into hot sis and hot mom with his friends and neighbours. Mom sister action and through it all, dad remains oblivious. They do other relatives, co-workers, strangers, gangs, glory holes, complete debauchery
this is the best incest story pls.continue the rest I can't wait to see how mother take her share of son cock and you can write the different series of it (family affair mum have our own share of it he son goodies)
I have been reading your stories since The Complete Submission: Series.
Have Phillip take his mom, not in a car. Right there on the that trip. Then having mom, son and daughter before she heads off to college. Leaving dad out of it.
Have the sister decide to become a nun but keep her brother available to keep fucking his sister the sister.
I could go for another sister story or two, they just dont seem finished by a long ways :) ...and while I usually dont like the parents included in the story, mom here doesn't seem so bad, maybe even the three of them after mom gets ahold of his dick a few times, hehehe.
Leave dad out of it. Hell, she's lusting after his dick for a reason, either she isn't getting any or what she is getting is not making her happy, or not as happy as what she just saw in the back seat could make her!
I dont have any interest in tent swapping, mostly because Im selfish and have no intention of sharing my sister! ;)
I certainly have zero interest in dad. Ugh. Not my cup of tea. Hell, if it was I wouldnt be reading this story, lol. Cause, you know, the only thing creepier than some guy poking me in the ass would be my dad poking me in the ass. Eww. Just sayin.
I agree with the thought of leaving this as a stand alone. It might be hot for mom to get into the action, but would really be unnecessary.
I enjoyed your story so much I want more. If possible please write all these stories you mentioned above... I'm suddenly your biggest fan so thank you for the multiple orgasms!
I think just leave it. Previous comment says it perfectly: novelty is now lost, and the only way to go it to have a big family fuckfest. And I and a lot of people would just be disappointed by that.
Now that Mom knows what is going on between the brother ane sister, she needs a little piece of the action. She could be in the bathroom pissing when he barges in on her and helps her finish peeing or sees her nice enlarged teats.
She decides right then and there she wants his cock in her mouth, cunt, or both.
So he now becomes a motherfucker and lets her have his cock on a regular basis. Mother encourages him to let er hold his cock when he needs to piss so she can play with it while he goes.
Don't get me wrong on this, but you should let the story end here. As I said: don't get me wrong! Your writing is great, you create a nice atmosphere here and its a very enjoyable read, even though: I don't think you should add anything more. Why? Because the charm of the story lies within the novel experience of a brother discovering his love for his sister, this being a first for him and sex being a first for her, both on the way to be separated for a time, when she is heading for college. An additional chapter would not have that novelty. It would either be about having more sex with the sister (novelty lost), his mother joining in and such. Those would clearly be possibilities for you to follow, but I don't see this story as the start of such a everyone fucks everybody series. Also I believe, letting it end there, with the question of why the mother did react the way she did and what might eventually follow fits the story.
All of your possible scenarios sound good to me. I'd prefer that brother and sister continue, with mom knowing and complicit but not yet joining in.
very erotic, well written,,moms always know whats going on,,
There is no "Gone with the Wind" idea here---even though you really have some interesting "hooks" set to continue the story if you want. I am always disappointed though when a talented writer yields to the temptation to just have everybody fuck each other. How many stories have we all read like that?
Anyway, resist the urge to try to write an American "War and Peace."
If you WERE to make more parts, ALL of those would be good ideas XD
Good story well written I liked the way the guy worked it so he ended up with sis on his lap . . .
And there is something else needed to move and mom should insist on sitting in back with him, it is only fair.
yes this story should be continued I want 2 know what else mom said ,
I loved this story. I can't wait to see what happens in the future. I really want to read 'Family Affair: Orgy'
You continue to just write more and more good stuff. Love it . keeps me Cumming for more.
moms were really angels! most of moms allows their kids to have sex and candidly watching them in action.
I loved your story. My girlfriend and would love to read more about this story.
We can't wait.
I always this is a very hot premise, but in standard form it's pretty much been done to death. You, Jasmine, have found a genuine new development - well done! Of COURSE we all want a second chapter, to further unpack the new relationships between Philip, Mum, Tanya and Dad, and to enjoy your well-written descriptions of loads more wonderful red-hot fucking!
Vince
You should do a second chapter, where the mom can't stop thinking about it and ends up seducing the son
THAT WAS REALLY HOT. I HAD A BIG SMILE ON MY FACE AND I DON'T KNOW WHY IT REMINDED ME OF THE TIME I CAUGHT MY OLDEST SISTER FUCKING MY OLDER BROTHER JUST AS THEY FINISHED AND SHE FIGURED TO DO ME ALSO TO KEEP MY MOUTH SHUT, lol THEN OF COURSE I HAD TO TEACH MY YOUNGER SISTER HOW TO FUCK ALSO. GOOD MEMORIES!
THANK YOU silkstockingslover THIS MADE MY DAY!
The mom was a surprise, it was a nice one. I liked the story it got me good and hard.
on a familiar theme
the twist with mom watching was completely unexpected
I think you should make a continuation where mom and sis fuck Phillip.
This does not require a continuation. It's a hot fantasy, not a riveting story.
Although making more fantasies with the same characters could be hot too.
Just keep it him and sis . I hope they have a great time sharing a tent . Give her many creampies .
Congratulations for another job very well done!
I really hope that you do continue to develop this story line, although I believe that you could just omit the "Daddy Loves Dick Too" theme. Part of the reason for that is personal - am not a fan of gay porn. Admittedly, that's MY constraint. But the other reason is that it would stretch the bounds of believability too much for me. It's far more believable to think that a heterosexual family could be FFM (mom, daughter/sister with son or father) or MMF (with father, son and daughter/sister or mom). Adding the male-male element seems to stretch things too far. Just my thoughts on it.
Nevertheless, this is a well-written, HOT story and is left wide open for future development. Looking forward to Chapter 2!
X-Man
I have not looked yet, but I am hoping there is more to this story. Very well written, great taboo subject and future possibilities! 5 stars and now a favorite!
Son with huge cock finds sister; Mom, and three female co-worker at a bachelorette party in a nudie bar, with lots of cash to spend. Dancers, co-workers and sis and Mom start with giving him free lap dances and winds up in an all out orgy with cum dripping down everyone's thighs.
Good story. You are my favourite author btw. Would like to see him fuck his granny as well.
I know now I need a good banging after reading this hot story.. I'm out of breathe from coming so hard with them.. ummmmmm
I love all those ideas. Not to sure about the dad liking dick but that's just because that's not my cup of tea. Do whatever you feel is best!
Any of your suggestions would be greatly appreciated, you did a great job on this one.
all the ideas soung good except the dad one, forget him with the kids, put him with grandma and his wife, maybe his/her sister, that's plenty hot. no gay stuff.
I'm in love. The hidden sex under others noses are the best. Please keep writing this series and if you need another proofreader, editor, or just someone to cum from the story, let me know.
Please keep it up! Love your work.... can't wait for chapter 2!
That was a really good story. Definetly should make a part two. It even more
Please continue this .Awesome story so far .
I would love to see the tent swap. Dad could get involved, but please, nothing between Phillip and Dad.
Loved the story also love the ideas for the other stories you must write. But please leave Dad out and please do not make Phillip bi.
This is a great story and I look forward to more chapters but leave dad out. Or if you bring dad into the relationship don't make the men bisexual. Like Philip I wished his sister would have been wearing stockings when he took her virginity.
My vote are the two:
FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY
Mom decides she needs a ride on her son's big cock.
FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME
Son pleases Mom & Sister while Dad is away
Excellent story. Can't wait for part 2, 3,4. (hoping)
A very yummy story indeed! I like your ideas for the follow on stories too! Thank you!
This part is great and I'm currently working on Part TWO. I've completed editing to the point at which Philip is busy tasting his mother's honeypot.
I'll try to finish tonight (Friday, Oct. 20) because I realize you are on deadline.
I'm not used to sending these kinds of things so you may have to help me along in that regard. I know there's a risk in publicizing #s ... 9098626584. Call me if you want, or email me your No. or just email me directions and your Email Address.
Thanx, Dan
hot and nice story with a surprise ending.
I want a reading of a sequel!
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English is not my native language.
Mom decides she needs a ride on her son's big cock...yes, that sounds like a hot continuation on where the car ride story ended. This was an extremely hot scenario.
Part 2 is written and almost done editing and will be out later in October.
It is called Bathroom Mommy and even has a bit of a twist.
Jasmine
I really enjoyed your version of backseat sex... but if you write a sequel, I would like to read about an encounter of these two siblings having loving sex without the cars' backseat location. Perhaps somewhere they can truly show each other how much love they can demonstrate thru (during?) sex but in much more comfortable surroundings.
No cars and little knowledge of what to expect of girls. Now at 85 I am way past all of what I have just been excited about. Well I can dream can't I.
..............that Mom will accept what she has witnessed as fulfillment of her now ignited and hot trending libido !
You've left the door open perfectly for a sequel. Even if you only write one more, just to get the mother involved. You've gotta do it!
It's a great story and I'd love to see ALL of the suggestions cum to life as only you can tell it.