by silkstockingslover
Yes please add more to this story line I am sure mom would agree she needs some of what her son has
I love backseat stories.
Especially with brother and sister.
Keep the series going.
Can’t wait for the next chapter
Definitely....You should continue!!! That was so hot I shot everywhere right at the same time, he shot his load all over Sis and Mom watched!
Great story in all aspects. As much as I’m sure we’d all love a sequel, I don’t think one is necessary. The hints are enough and the fantasy it leaves in place is perhaps better than the reality. You know how it is: you write an epic starter and then everything to come after doesn’t quite seem to work. Leaving it to your readers’ imaginations is best.
I’d also like to point out that this seems to be the spiritual successor of a similar story about a mom bouncing on her son’s lap on a similar trip. So, for me, this story has been a long time coming.
- Aaron.
You definitely should write a sequel to this story where the brother and sister continue their romance.
The story was good, but now I've got the hots for Jasmine!! Her writing style has got me standing to attention!!!
This story would have been much hotter if it wasn't just a re-write of 'Backseat Mommy', so it loses my 5* based on originality.
Okay, yes. This was hot and tender at the same time. While this was very similar to "Backseat Mommy" it was not tragic, dark and loveless (In my opinion). This was so much better. Oh, and there are many similar "sitting on a loved one's lap while riding" stories out there. Seems to be a popular theme. Well done. More please. 5 Stars
I vote for "Bathroom Mommy" and "Crazy threesome"
I love this story! My 3rd read of it! And since I'm logged in Anonymous you got five stars 3 times from me. Really loved the hilarity as the end approached. This is the story that brought me to read all of your works. Thank you very much, Norman Cox
What an exciting story, well written and it draws you in as if you are there! Love it. Keep em cumming!
Don't know when you wrote this, but it was really hot. Would love to see a sequel (if it's not all too late) either the Swapping Tents or crazy 3some; the swapping I like best. Loved the story.
This was great!! A 2nd part, perhaps a bit shorter but telling what happened after the family's arrival would be most welcome!! Would mainly want the 2nd part to be the brother-sister continuation, perhaps ending (but their continuing!) back home.
Another great story. I have to say I'm really interested in seeing Dad takes dick. Please do it.
Well I am obviously late for voting and see mom in the bathroom won out. Perhaps the best choice , although I wasn’t sure escalation was called for and certainly not massive escalation to include everyone. But that’s my bias, Old Al’s father was such a total and complete “unfather” or antifather” or whatever, that ANYTHING involving the paternal side of the family is a toal turn off, and in one case was an amazingly effective emetic.
I will go read the next chapter, to see where it goes, simply because it is your story.
Al
I would like the 2nd part to be the brother-sister continuation.
weii done!
Metta sisko ja minä nussimme kiimassa autossa maaseutumatkalla. Yövyimme hotellissa avioparina. Saimme nussia rauhassa.
Follow on with.
Son takes over driving.
Mom sits on dad's lap and rekindle their etc
I enjoyed the story quite a bit! Personally, i'm always a little disappointed when stories that hold my attentionn as well as this one dont end in unprotected creampies, but I recognize that just isnt everyones kink. In terms of follow up stories I love the "bathroom mommy" ( which i think has already been written at the time of this comment), "crazy threesome," and "swapping tents." Regardless, thanks for writing! Great story
I really liked it, if you had of explained how nice your sisters pussy and tits were and how hard and wet your cock was, anymore than you did, I would have tossed that box out and got down between you two and licked her pussy and sucked your cock.
Similar to another Backseat fucking trip, but very good. Although I like some of your suggestions, I think this could remain a onetime attraction.
I cant believe I'm about to say this but please do:
FAMILY AFFAIR: DAD TAKES DICK TOO
WOw....,.where the author could make more story's is unbelievable. Aunt, babies, at least 4 constant horny women, ect.
240. There were two similar stories that I have read so far: Backseat Mama and Back Seat Sister. These are all sexy and fun to read.
If it continues I want to be the cousin who spends Thanksgiving and is thankful for all the giving.
Love both ideas of mum getting some and swapping tents, who knows they might end up in the one tent
I absolutely loved the story. As I was reading it, I was hoping that he would cum inside of his sister and get her pregnant. There's nothing better than impregnation stories about father and daughter or brother and sister. Tanya sounds like she's a little hottie who would look even hotter with a baby bump
I was hoping that he would cum inside of his sister, so he could show her what its like to feel hot seman being ejaculated inside of her pussy. Although it really doesn't matter, I would have liked it more if Tanya had been the oldest of the two. There's something about a older sibling, seducing a younger brother and getting pregnant by him
That would be great to see her reaction when she realizes that he is coming inside of her and she's not on any kind of birth control, and knowing that she is probably going to get pregnant by her brother
Jasmine, As a fellow writer, but of poetry and a recent novel, you artful words left me wanting more, so I will surely read on here and sample your other stories. Bravo. JEF
This was the dumbest story I've ever read. Fucking your virgin in the car with your parents in the front seat? And then having your mom see your sister get covered in cum? That's so fucking stupid
Nagyon tetszett, kérlek folytasd a történetet anyával is kell baszni mert látta milyen szép faszod van.
I loved it. Not sure about dad raking dick too. I think it'd be better to keep dad oblivious. But definitely fuck Mom.
OMG, Jasmine!!!!!!!! That was absolutely awesome. I came so hard as I got to the part where Tanya took control of the fucking and was riding her brother. The whole story was excellent, and I am hoping you will continue it. You already have a start for the next chapter, when you had Phillip's mom see his cock. Mom seeing that huge cock, makes her want to take it for a ride. You have several possible future chapters listed, so PLEASE, PLEASE continue the story. I look forward to hearing more from you. Love Wayne
Very hot and I'm glad that you wrote the next part "Bathroom Mommy". I look forward to reading it and I hope there will be more in the future.
Loved the story although I've read others with a similar theme of fucking in the back seat.
I enjoyed reading mom witness the finish.
There'd be no way to actually pull off sex in the back without the scent of the sex coupling wafting forward. Nice fantasy though.
4 stars from me.
'I wasn't sure if it was aimed at me or Dad,' Out of context, just an innocent centence. In context one of the most hilarous sentences ever. Fife stars for the sentence alone.
On the other side I would like to know what mother really made of the situation.
one of the first stories i read when i first found this site read some of ur others such a powwerrful effect
Love the story don't know if your still active, or even if it is continued elsewhere. But I would like FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY for a next part then
FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME after that then
FAMLY AFFAIR: SWAPPING TENTS for the big finish
Finish this one . Mom does say anything, dad never finds out , mom and sister fucks son/ brother
Loved it, I'm still licking my cum off my hands and stomach. May read it again any one need a good blow job . Contact me with # Virgin Boi Pussy 🍑
Just keep writing ANY sequel chapters!!! You Write...We Will Read Them, you know this!!
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Do the whole series. I want to drain my balls some more. Just the titles made me hard.
Very hot. I like how the mother eventually saw the action at the end. I fucked my older sister in the back of a boat during a party. I didnt cum in her afraid of getting her pregnant. I wished that I did. It was the best fuck that I ever had.
Sign me up for “ FAMILY AFFAIR: DAD TAKES DICK TOO” and “ FAMLY AFFAIR: SWAPPING TENTS” with some family ignorance thrown in. Keep dad ignorant of this hook-up, and keep mom/daughter ignorant of dad/son. For the tent swapping, have mom/daughter plot it, without the son/dad knowing. Just lots of incest driven scheming. I know you already did mother/son but that’s my least favorite of all possible matches.