All Comments on 'Family Affair: Backseat Sister'
by silkstockingslover
- 369 Comments
I loved it. Not sure about dad raking dick too. I think it'd be better to keep dad oblivious. But definitely fuck Mom.
Nagyon tetszett, kérlek folytasd a történetet anyával is kell baszni mert látta milyen szép faszod van.
This was the dumbest story I've ever read. Fucking your virgin in the car with your parents in the front seat? And then having your mom see your sister get covered in cum? That's so fucking stupid
Jasmine, As a fellow writer, but of poetry and a recent novel, you artful words left me wanting more, so I will surely read on here and sample your other stories. Bravo. JEF
I was hoping that he would cum inside of his sister, so he could show her what its like to feel hot seman being ejaculated inside of her pussy. Although it really doesn't matter, I would have liked it more if Tanya had been the oldest of the two. There's something about a older sibling, seducing a younger brother and getting pregnant by him
That would be great to see her reaction when she realizes that he is coming inside of her and she's not on any kind of birth control, and knowing that she is probably going to get pregnant by her brother
I absolutely loved the story. As I was reading it, I was hoping that he would cum inside of his sister and get her pregnant. There's nothing better than impregnation stories about father and daughter or brother and sister. Tanya sounds like she's a little hottie who would look even hotter with a baby bump
Love both ideas of mum getting some and swapping tents, who knows they might end up in the one tent
If it continues I want to be the cousin who spends Thanksgiving and is thankful for all the giving.
240. There were two similar stories that I have read so far: Backseat Mama and Back Seat Sister. These are all sexy and fun to read.
WOw....,.where the author could make more story's is unbelievable. Aunt, babies, at least 4 constant horny women, ect.
I cant believe I'm about to say this but please do:
FAMILY AFFAIR: DAD TAKES DICK TOO
Similar to another Backseat fucking trip, but very good. Although I like some of your suggestions, I think this could remain a onetime attraction.
I really liked it, if you had of explained how nice your sisters pussy and tits were and how hard and wet your cock was, anymore than you did, I would have tossed that box out and got down between you two and licked her pussy and sucked your cock.
I enjoyed the story quite a bit! Personally, i'm always a little disappointed when stories that hold my attentionn as well as this one dont end in unprotected creampies, but I recognize that just isnt everyones kink. In terms of follow up stories I love the "bathroom mommy" ( which i think has already been written at the time of this comment), "crazy threesome," and "swapping tents." Regardless, thanks for writing! Great story
Follow on with.
Son takes over driving.
Mom sits on dad's lap and rekindle their etc
Metta sisko ja minä nussimme kiimassa autossa maaseutumatkalla. Yövyimme hotellissa avioparina. Saimme nussia rauhassa.
Well I am obviously late for voting and see mom in the bathroom won out. Perhaps the best choice , although I wasn’t sure escalation was called for and certainly not massive escalation to include everyone. But that’s my bias, Old Al’s father was such a total and complete “unfather” or antifather” or whatever, that ANYTHING involving the paternal side of the family is a toal turn off, and in one case was an amazingly effective emetic.
I will go read the next chapter, to see where it goes, simply because it is your story.
Al
Another great story. I have to say I'm really interested in seeing Dad takes dick. Please do it.
This was great!! A 2nd part, perhaps a bit shorter but telling what happened after the family's arrival would be most welcome!! Would mainly want the 2nd part to be the brother-sister continuation, perhaps ending (but their continuing!) back home.
Don't know when you wrote this, but it was really hot. Would love to see a sequel (if it's not all too late) either the Swapping Tents or crazy 3some; the swapping I like best. Loved the story.
What an exciting story, well written and it draws you in as if you are there! Love it. Keep em cumming!
I love this story! My 3rd read of it! And since I'm logged in Anonymous you got five stars 3 times from me. Really loved the hilarity as the end approached. This is the story that brought me to read all of your works. Thank you very much, Norman Cox
Okay, yes. This was hot and tender at the same time. While this was very similar to "Backseat Mommy" it was not tragic, dark and loveless (In my opinion). This was so much better. Oh, and there are many similar "sitting on a loved one's lap while riding" stories out there. Seems to be a popular theme. Well done. More please. 5 Stars
I vote for "Bathroom Mommy" and "Crazy threesome"
This story would have been much hotter if it wasn't just a re-write of 'Backseat Mommy', so it loses my 5* based on originality.
The story was good, but now I've got the hots for Jasmine!! Her writing style has got me standing to attention!!!
You definitely should write a sequel to this story where the brother and sister continue their romance.
Great story in all aspects. As much as I’m sure we’d all love a sequel, I don’t think one is necessary. The hints are enough and the fantasy it leaves in place is perhaps better than the reality. You know how it is: you write an epic starter and then everything to come after doesn’t quite seem to work. Leaving it to your readers’ imaginations is best.
I’d also like to point out that this seems to be the spiritual successor of a similar story about a mom bouncing on her son’s lap on a similar trip. So, for me, this story has been a long time coming.
- Aaron.
Definitely....You should continue!!! That was so hot I shot everywhere right at the same time, he shot his load all over Sis and Mom watched!
I love backseat stories.
Especially with brother and sister.
Keep the series going.
Can’t wait for the next chapter
Yes please add more to this story line I am sure mom would agree she needs some of what her son has
Loved the story and think maybe the next chapter could be the bathroom with mummy at grans or mummy could take the back seat on the way to the camp grounds.
okay what happens after dropping off boxes? they're on their way to go camping mom just found out what happens next? really should have a chapter 2 thinking mom wants some cock too the way she was looking maybe even wants to peak in the kids tent to watch again only this time being asked to join in.
This is not an uncommon theme and I have read many stories along this line.
Once you set the scene to make it interesting. The event but what happens next?
You have bitten into the apple, now what?
Thank you for an amazing story that made me wish it was me getting it on with my sister !! The intiment times of fucking with your parents so close by and then finding your mom knows !! Was there a possibility I could get it on with my mom ? My cock was hard all thru the story and as I said,,,, I wish it was me ° well done !! Well done !!
I really enjoy your stories. I became an exhibitionist and developed some of my kinks in a way that although much tamer makes your stories resonate. And make me painfully hard. Please write more
This was extremely well written and i love the story. I did see a grammatical/spelling error on the first page. Good job!
Please write all the sequels to this story!! I love it!!
with a happy ending (so far) but think an additional chapter would be nice, where the son gets to do his Mommy, but not in the car, and gets to finish doing his little sister. Thanx for another read.
Mom and son definitely need to get familiar with each other.
I just love your two page formats, more Please.
The sneaky nature of them fucking in the back seat was so hot, trying to be quiet when all your sense say to be loud!!! And then we his mom catches him cumming on his sister’s face is such a hot fantasy. I often fantasize about my wife walking in just as I cum on her friends face! I think part 2 would be great!! Maybe they end up staying at grandma’s a few days, dad has to take grandma to a dr’s appt and something happens when mom has a talk with her kids. Maybe she’s a closet voyeur and instructs and watches them, maybe at the end she takes her sons cock and jerks him till he cum on his sister again....
I love the mom and daughter switch places on the boy. Then mom and daughter tag-team him. If the dad is a cool kind of guy then let the daughter catch him jacking off or maybe skinny-dipping and get him. Then while he and daughter are busy one time, let mom join, then later while dad is doing daughter, mom and sin come in together and let it become a family orgy.
After that maybe the daughter has a friend or two with a hot mom and those women or maybe entire families could join in.
Mon should ride in the back on the trip back home...
...for boxes they can have someone at the campsite give them something to stash in the backseat
I really got into it. Wow. In my humble opinion, I think, and hope, you do continue this story. But, by the tone, I think brother and sister, intensely, should continue. Maybe mother listens in on brother and sister, masturbates and takes her passion to dad. Mother and daughter, with your good story-telling, yes. Son, sister and mother, yes. Dad, other than with over-heated mother (he loves it), no. Turning it into another boring, un-erotic family orgy story, would be a shame. This first story has heat, emotion, intelligence and humor. The sister, maybe confiding in a girlfriend is made aware of her bi-sexuality, experiments, likes it, shares friend with her brother... Forcing a sudden desire for her mother, on the sister, or the same for the brother, again, changes the great tone you started with. I know I'm a total nerd. Again, just my humble opinion.
Would have been even better if Tanya had let him cum in her pussy. Next time, maybe.....
man this story rocks! me and my gf got off to this togther thx. cant wait for the next one
Perhaps son and sister are forced to share a tent, mom is in the know and secretly listens in before accidentally being perved on by dad who takes her later only hinting at what he knows.
great story..amazing fantasy..yea..i think you should continue
shame this story is dead id have loved to see the son take the mom and daughter from the dad
Could definately do with a follow up chapter, love reading your stories
This is a great start of a beautiful story line, keep up the great work and I a looking forward to seeing more from this series!
Great story...a bit unrealistic that the Dad could be that clueless, but it's a fantasy after all! Good buildup!