All Comments on 'Finding Mom Pt. 01'

Cute mom. The story is really beautiful and full of exciting details . But come on, it kind of ended too soon, I was left wanting to see more romance and love.

The ending could be better but you can continue the story

Good start.

Wow! You can't stop there!!!!!! Go on soon please!!!!

All mothers and son should experience such tender moments. For the sexual repressed it's often a glimpse that starts things. Here a mere pubic hair.

Masterfully crafted in both content and mechanics from beginning to end.

That was a whole lot of buildup for fucking nothing, thanks for wasting my time.

More steam! Sexual tension between mom and son then culminate with a night in bed.

I like the story so far if you are thinking of making more chapters please do

think you should try another chapter for this one

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Ready for the next chapter

Does she go back to the public beach?

Does she begin to show off more at home?

Part One AND The End.

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If it's only the end of Part 1, the part number should have gone in the title.

As is, the story is good. It should be continued in order to be considered as anything better. There is more than sufficient room to expand and elaborate on the solid foundation here.

Why did the story shift from first person to third person after the first few paragraphs?

mom hairy pussy make a positive and lasting impression on son. Nate getting hard and jerking off gets Miriam out of her depressed state,

Well done BUT . . .

Poor Nate. What might haplenty should he actually see his Mon's nether region. Imagine if he were to see a trimmed bush? Or, or,a shaved pussy?

Setting created, time for M O R E .

More coming

same comment as Anonymous who said story went from first person to third person after a few paragraphs... Thus main story is interesting because i always had a fantasy of seeing my mom pubes to see bush or shaved pussy...

maybe continuing the story with the mom shaving her bush so when she'll confront her son about video he record on his phone she would show him her newly shaved pussy....

After reading all of the comments, I tend to agree: First, the story ending too abruptly; Second, there didn't seem to be a direction your story was heading; and Third, you need to edit your typos that seemingly occur with auto-corrections.

Did two people write this? Mid-stream the tense changed, and poor meriam or was it miriam, started talking. And yeah, the typos. Hoo, I couldn’t go on. Sorry, find a good editor.

The lack of sexual knowledge and emotional repression is exactly what I would expect from such a family. The only reason why the mother would be depressed is because the bread winner is dead and someone has to make money. Chapter 1 does not provide enough material to give a rating to this story.

Did not like this at all!

Hate it where's the incest just a son jacking of to his old prude mother?????????????????

You can’t leave us hanging like that. Sorry.

Just a 3 not much to it no incest