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Click here"A few weeks!" Katie exclaimed.
Brenda shrugged. "You got any suggestions? I don't want to just ask someone we can't trust. What if they can use the triggers on this video on us?"
"Okay, okay," Katie resigned. "We'll wait. I'll just avoid the video and Master Boratus until then."
*
Katie got home, fully expecting to get a text from Master Boratus that she could ignore, but nothing came.
She got ready for bed with her customary glances at her phone. Eventually she fell asleep only to be woken by her mom arriving home from her date.
"How was it?" Katie called out.
"A—maz—ing!" He mom replied. "I'll be seeing him again."
Katie got up and opened her door just as her mom came up the stairs. The woman glowed.
She did have a good time. Oh wait. I know that look.
"You got laid, didn't you?"
Her mom smiled. "A lady doesn't kiss and tell." She walked away, wobbling a bit. She was tipsy.
"Did you drive home?" Katie asked.
"Uber!" Her mom replied. "I'll grab the car in the morning."
"You definitely got laid," Katie said.
Her mom stopped at her bedroom door and turned to her. "No, honey, I got wildly and orgasmically fucked!"
"On a first date? You?"
"When you meet him, You'll get it."
Katie put her hands on her hips. "Oh? And when am I meeting him?"
"When I've fucked him enough that I won't want to jump him while you're in the same room." She winked and went into her bedroom.
Tipsy mom is a slut. But I do like her confidence. I wonder how bad drunk mom is.
*
The next morning Katie got a text from Master Boratus. She looked at it, ready to tell him she wouldn't be chatting with him for a while, but then put away her phone, not even remembering what he'd sent her.
Her day played out as usual, school, homework, dinner with mom. After dinner though, she decided to head to a local pub, The Boar's Head. The place was dark with a few patrons. It seemed designed for intimacy and privacy. She headed for a booth near the back and sat down.
"What can I get ya?" asked the waitress.
"Rum and Redbull," Katie replied.
When the waitress brought her the drink, Katie sat back and happily sipped it. After a few minutes, she wondered why she'd even decided to come to this pub. She'd never been here before.
A man slipped into the booth on the opposite side of her. Black, shaved head, confident smile. Familiar. He wore jeans and a black leather jacket with a black t-shirt underneath.
"Uhhhh, excuse me?" Katie said. "Did I ask you to sit here?"
"No," he replied. "I asked you."
That voice.
A chill went down her spine at the same time her panties became soaked. She almost dropped her drink.
"M...Master Boratus?" she asked.
"Good girl."
I'm a GOOD GIRL!
She couldn't move. She didn't want to. She could only stare into his eyes. As she did, the world drifted away.
*
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- COMMENTS
Absolutely amazing story and this was just first chapter of 12 something long series?
I was really shocked and delighted by this pleasant surprise afterall i thought it was only till here and it kind of left a bitter taste in mouth at such a sudden ending.
Thanks a lot for amazing fantasy
i can't wait for this to be me :D riding around Toronto in Your passenger seat, completely empty and being filled up with Your commands.
i can't wait to show up to a place with no memory of how we got there and no idea what sort of mischief of Yours im going to stumble upon as we go about our outing.
Great start kind of hoping it sould just be katie becoming the slave but seems there might be ithers involved aswell
this is so fun to read. i love it and gave it five stars. thanks for sharing.
I read chapter 01, following it back from the current one to start at the beginning. It was a well done idea, and the girls in it click well and have personality.
The only critique would be tighten it up a bit. Katie is the main character and progressed which is great. There's a lot of 'good girl' sequence. Repeating is a key to the hypnosis, but maybe some could be compressed and move a bit faster. I'm not a good editor, but that would be the only minor thing I see in a great story!
Great Story like how it goes on so far. I wonder if it would work the hypnosis on me. Thanks for sharing.
Well it's a Great Story, while i was reading it I was wondering "How to make this happen for real, is it Possible, do you ever respond to your Readers ?? So does the "Video" really exist ?? How can i watch it or is it only a Video for women to watch ??
Can it be adapted ??? Would love to correspond so I am hoping you do respond with your "Readers".
Hope to hear from you soon!
Wonder full idea with equally fantastic follow thru and writing. I'm very intrigued and thoroughly entertained. While I'm not sure this adaptation of mind control holds any scientific merit, I do enjoy the level of control, and the repetitive messages, i know, are very on par with keeping the subject in a fog. Overall, really well done.
This is especially sexy in context!
Not normally my thing, but something about it really drew me in. I hope you continue with this series - it has so much potential. :)
Not my usual go to, but something about it just got to me. Triggered me? lol Really hope you continue this as a series. It has so much potential. :)
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