All Comments on 'Punishing The Unruly Son Ch. 03'
by RandomAuthor
- 24 Comments
I really appreciate u posting the stories much faster as I requested of u to do... Thank You very much... I hate to wait 5days - 5 months for a chapter to b released !! And as I said earlier... I cant wait to see him pounding the both of them to oblivion :P Although its ur story... I'd like a twist on the 5th day of his punishment... It goes like this... He'l be asked to do another new humiliating act... and his self-control would crash down... He'l ask for the 500$ and ask to move out stating he tried... but cant go further... Then both his mom n sis will beg for him to stay... and so on... And he'd agree to stay on the condition that he wont b pressurized into further acts of humiliation than he already is in... M writing an essay xD [P.S. This is the 1st series m commenting on... I used to just rate and move on xD]
- so I shall merely say 'Thank you' once again and award you 5 stars for this intensely addictive story.
I wonder what Bobby's reward is going to be? Something exquisitely humiliating for him and amusing for his tormentors, I would think!
I like how this story was going. I really do like it. I just hope you FINISH this one.
wow i am really enjoying this story very much!!!! looking foward to more!! lucky bobby!
I don't ever make comments, but I have to make an exception here. I grew up with two brothers who I wish were punished like this. They probably weren't as bad as Bobby, but, they were close. I am really enjoying this story, and I was so surprised to find another new chapter today.
I dont usually comment on other comments, but this time was too good to pass up.
Dear Anonymous(just below this comment)
1. You are welcome to criticize a story. But it would look a lot better if you commented with your username and put something constructive.
2. Please learn how to spell. Your comment looks like a "shear wast of space".
Sincerely,
LaRascasse
A good smouldering start, looking forward to the interesting build up to his eventual compliance and respect!. Well done more power to your'pen'
Normally not the genre' that I would invest the time in reading but I must say the crafting of this story is excellent...well told.
The slow build up is killing me cause it is keeping me hard in ancipation. Very real and powerful. Can't wait to read the rest.
It looks like your putting your own comments in to make it seem people actually like this abusive tale. This belongs on the BDSM site not incest since there is know incest sex or any sex at all.In my opinion the Mother and sister should be the ones being punished
Hey,
that's a very good story! I like it a lot! I hope you will continue it! 5 Stars from me!
best wishes
TK
I enjoyed chapter 3 but I'm looking forward to chapter 4 when he gets his first cumm-uppance and a good spanking him and I'm sure ther girls will enjoy themselves when Bobby goes to sleep
Everything was going great, I was hanging on and loving every word, and then the sister had to give everything away. She betrayed her mother's intentions with her side deal and spilled all the little beans that made the story awkward and exciting. Now it's all fixed and I can no longer trust the son's sincerity since he knows his sister is hot for him and is willing to cut him some slack.
Truly a disappointing twist to a great story concept. Sorry, but I don't think I can continue.
im constantly hard and dripping while reading this but the little twist at the end of this chapter was a bit of a letdown for the storyline. im hoping the little slip that she had somehow is woven into the story. i am sure that you are going to be true to the fine job of writing you have started. GOOD JOB!!! so far
I never comment, but this story....... OML the absolute best on the website!!
What will he be when they're done with him? Will he even be a man anymore? Or a sissy bitch for some fag?
..."She explained that for his punishment to be effective, she felt it had to contain not only punitive measures, but also deterrents for the future. Those deterrents, she went on to say, included subjecting him to personally embarrassing and humiliating circumstances.".... But be aware you are a member of a cherishing loving family!!! Ha ha ha!!! More idiocy isnt possible. Only your lechery is the mainspring for that carp and the monkeys will applaud how ever because they got wank material!!!
kind of slow. what 18 yr. old thinks its punishment to be undressed by his older sister in front of his Mom and then have his cock and balls played with? Really !!!!! Make him turn around and show his ass or something
This is the start of breaking him. This kind of breaking would have serious mental health issues.
Goes against the loving mother concept.