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Click hereI got up the next morning. I was shocked when I entered the kitchen. Betty was wearing a fairly translucent robe that when she stood in front of the light you could see her entire body. Julie was wearing a t shirt that came halfway down her ass. Her ass and pussy were completely on display.
Peter was speechless. So was I. Cameron and Lou were carrying on a conversation like nothing was unusual. I didn't know what to say, I just joined everybody and acted like everything was normal. I did notice that both Betty and Julie shaved their pussies. Mine was trimmed for a bathing suit, but that's it.
Friday Julie, Cameron, Betty and I wanted to go exploring on the snowmobiles. Julie and Cameron wanted to drive. It was decided I would go with Cameron and Betty with Julie.
I went upstairs to get ready. Julie followed. I realized this was my chance to talk to her. I followed her into her room and closed the door
"What's up?" she asked.
It was disconcerting talking to her with her ass and pussy showing but I was determined.
"I have to tell you something," I said
"Ok," she responded.
"I don't know how to say this, but I saw Cameron fucking your mom yesterday."
"Oh my god, no!" she said.
"Yes," I said.
"Tell me all,' she insisted.
"Well, when I got home from skiing your mom was bent over the table and Cameron was fucking her from behind," I explained.
"Oh wow, was she liking it?" she asked.
I was confused. What was she asking?
"Um, yes, she seemed to be."
"What else?" she asked.
"Um, well, umm, uhh, your dad was watching," I stuttered.
""Oh my god, really?" she exclaimed. "He was just watching?"
Her voice almost sounded mocking, but I was sure it was just the shock.
"Well, he was watching and jerking off," I couldn't believe I was telling her this.
"So," she said. "Let me get this straight. Mom was bent over a table, Cameron was fucking her, she was loving it, and dad was jacking off watching?"
I nodded.
"That's just what Cameron told me too. Except he told me how hot mom's pussy was and how he got her to fuck him. It was pretty hot," she explained.
"Cameron told you?" I asked, stunned.
"God yes, he tells me everything. I love hearing about how he fucked someone. Wanna hear how it happened?"
Reluctantly I nodded my head.
"Well," she started. "Cameron is a great flirt. I'm sure you saw it the last two days."
I nodded
She continued, "When we got here, one of the first things Cameron said was 'your mom is hot'. He told me he wanted to fuck her."
I must have looked shocked.
She went on, "Oh I don't mind. I love watching Cameron fuck. He is so hot and he takes care of all my needs. I am his total slut. He can fuck me or anyone he wants. I know he's mine. Plus, it's kind of hot having a woman know your man is a better fuck than hers.
Anyway, he told me he wanted to fuck mom, I just giggled and told him to go for it. Wednesday and Thursday he flirted with her, he kept pushing her limits and seeing how dad reacted. Cameron is great at seducing women and gaming men. He's fucked other women while their husbands watched."
I was stunned.
"Friday when we all left if you remember mom was wearing that short robe. She'd bought it the day before at Cameron's suggestion. Cameron commented on it and mom said to him 'I'm glad you like it." Cameron then told dad that his wife was hot. Dad responded that he thought so too. Cameron said he had work to do. He got up and hugged mom from behind thanking her for everything. She backed into him, he was semi hard and he knew she could feel it. Cameron has a great cock.
Cameron said, 'Sorry Lou, I have to kiss your wife.' He grabbed her and kissed her. Dad watched. Mom kissed back.
Cameron turned mom to face dad. 'Help me get her out of these jeans." Dad undid her zipper then Cameron pushed her jeans down and fucked her over the table."
That was it? Lou just unzipped her so Cameron could fuck her? I had a picture of Peter undoing my jeans in my mind. I just sat there speechless. Julie brought me out if it. As if she'd just told me it's cold outside instead of how her boyfriend fucked her mom, she said, "Get dressed, let's get going."
Thousands of thoughts ran through my head as I got dressed. I met the others and we all climbed on the snowmobiles. I climbed on behind Cameron and wrapped my arms around his waist. All I could feel was muscle. I just wanted to run my hands up and down his body.
As we rode I thought about what Julie said. She didn't care who Cameron fucked. I wondered how I felt about Peter. I guess I wouldn't care, but it wasn't because I was proud or satisfied. It's because it would just mean he'd leave me alone. How sad I thought. I loved my husband. I wanted to want him as well.
I spent the day flirting and laughing with Cameron as we rode we talked. He made comments about how sexy I was. I believed him. It was flattering knowing this sexy man found me sexy.
I could see Julie and Betty talking and laughing. I wondered what they were talking about. Julie knew Betty fucked Cameron but didn't care, could they be comparing notes?
The morning was great fun end it was time to head back. We arrived at the house and as we entered that Betty said let's get out of these wet clothes. Right in the doorway she and Julie started taking off their clothes. Peter, Cameron and Lou were watching. I started taking off my wet outer layer.
They were faster than me. They both stripped off everything but their underwear. Julie was wearing little pink boy short panties that were practically a thong along with a matching bralet. Betty was wearing a white practically see through thong and a matching bra. They turned to look at me. I took quick inventory. I was wearing a pair of pink bikinis. The kind that came three to a pack and a functional white bra. Nothing I'd want to show off in fact, I'd brought nothing I'd want to show off on the trip.
I realized that neither Betty or Julie knew what happened was going to happen, so the underwear they were wearing was what they usually wore. I was kind of ashamed that I didn't.
Not wanting anyone to see I went upstairs and put on a warm sweater and jeans. Julie and Betty followed me up and went to their rooms.
Julie yelled to the guys, "If you make some hot chocolate and a fire to keep me warm, I promise it will be worth it."
I wondered what she meant by that.
I was downstairs with the guys when Julie came down. I could see why she wanted to be warm. She was wearing a little V-neck T that came down almost past her ass and a little see through thong. You could see her ass and pussy as she walked. She plunked herself down on Cameron's lap.
Betty soon followed. She was wearing that translucent robe again,but barely tied shut. She sat down next to Cameron, he put his hand on her knee.
"Cameron looked at Peter. "Looks like your wife is overdressed," he said.
I wasn't sure how to respond. I was shocked he said it, but I also wondered how Peter would respond. I didn't say anything.
"Um, seems that way," Peter said.
"Well fix it," said Cameron jokingly. "I've been dying to see more of her since we got here."
Peter looked down, "I don't think she'd let me,"
I still hadn't responded. Too many thoughts flying through my head. No way I wanted Peter to undress me, well, maybe. I imagined showing of my body to Cameron. He was so hot, I wanted him to like it. The thought made my pussy tingle. I looked at Julie and Betty. I was still in my pink bikinis. I didn't want to be embarrassed. If Cameron was going to see me I wanted him to think I was sexy.
Then I thought, what was I thinking, this man fucked Betty and Julie. Was I going to be another conquest? I thought about how loud both Betty and Julie were when they fucked him. How they both praised his cock. I had been with four men in my life, all had average cooks. Could a big cock be all that much different? My mind flashed back to seeing his cock stretching Betty's pussy. Damn that looked hot.
"Sure she would," I heard Cameron say.
Cameron looked at me. "Stand up," he said.
I don't know why, I felt mesmerized, I stood up.
Cameron said to me, "I really want to fuck you."
Just like that, in front of my husband. In front of Betty, Lou, and Julie. I didn't respond I just looked at Peter.
"Don't look at him," Cameron said. "He'd love to see you fucked the right way.
I thought back to the conversation Peter and I had had. I realized that Peter had never said yes or no to the question.
Cameron stood up, he scooped me in his arms and kissed me. Again the scent of wood and leather. I could feel the muscles in his chest and arms as he kissed me. I didn't resist. I kissed back.
"Tell me what you want," he whispered in my ear.
I moaned.
"Say it," he pushed.
"I want to make love to you," I said.
"No you don't," he said. "Tell me what you really want."
I pulled back and looked him in the eyes. I thought of Peter behind me, not moving, not objecting. "I want you to fuck me," I whispered.
He pulled off my top. Now I was in bra panties and jeans.
"Go ask your husband to undo your jeans."
I knew I shouldn't, but my pussy was driving my body. I turned to Peter. I figured I'd give him a chance to back out.
"If you want this, undo my jeans," I said.
I stood there watching his face. He reached for the buttons.
"This will change our lives forever," I said.
He hesitated a minute, then undid the buttons on my jeans.
"Unzip them," Cameron said to Peter. It was obvious we were all under Cameron's control now. Peter unzipped my jeans.
Cameron then pulled me to him. He undid my bra. I shrugged it off and let it fall to the floor. I instinctively covered my tits with my hands.
With one arm he scooped me off the ground and held me. With the other he pulled my hand away. He wrapped his lips around my nipple.
I couldn't believe I was letting him do this but it felt good. Knowing I was being watched only made me feel slutty. Unfortunately I realized I liked feeling slutty. A lot. My husband always treated me like a wife. I wanted to be treated as a lover. I wanted to be fucked, not made love to. I moaned as he sucked on one nipple then the other.
"Get out of those pants," he said.
Not wanting him to see me in my pink bikinis I stripped of my pants and panties at the same time. I immediately became self conscious of my bush. It was neatly trimmed, yet Julie and Betty shaved theirs.
I looked around. Betty was stroking Lou's cock through his pants. Julie had her fingers in her panties. Peter seemed to be rubbing his cock through his jeans.
Cameron pushed lightly on my shoulders. "Suck me," he said.
I'd given maybe ten blowjobs in my life. I did not consider myself an expert. I got down on my knees and unzipped his pants. I wondered how big this thing was. So far I'd heard how amazing it was. I was kind of nervous as to what I would find.
What I found was not a monster. It was about 9" semi hard. It felt thick in my hands. My fingers could not reach around it. It was circumcised and as it got hard, perfectly straight. I wrapped my lips around it. I could barely get the tip in my mouth. There was a drop of precum that was salty on my tongue. I used both my hands to stroke his cock while I lightly fucked the tip in and out of my lips. It grew hard. It must have been 10" hard.
After a few minutes he pulled me to my feet. I didn't look at him. I looked down. I didn't know if I was good or not. He'd stopped me so quickly. I assumed I sucked at it.
"Mmmmm, that was good baby," he said. I looked up at him and smiled.
He reached both his hands under my ass and lifted me. I wrapped my legs around his waist, he carried me to where my husband was and dropped me, facing out, into his lap. He grabbed my legs and pushed them apart.
"Hold her legs," he said to Peter.
Peter grabbed my legs and pulled them back. I could feel his cock hard through his jeans. I looked around the room. Julie's panties were now on the floor and her fingers were buried in her pussy. Betty was on her knees between Lou's legs sucking his cock.
My pussy was dripping wet. Cameron knelt down between my legs, I mean between mine and Peter's legs. He placed the tip of his cock against my pussy and with his hand rubbed the head up and down my slit lubricating the tip. Then he started to enter me. I felt my pussy lips give way to accept the head of his cock.
He started gently pulling it out and sliding back in. With each stroke my pussy accepted more and more of him. I tried to relax so it would be easier, but I couldn't, I held my breath. It didn't hurt. It felt amazing. Like every piece of my body was full. I kept my eyes open and focused on his grey eyes.
With one last thrust he was all the way in me. I tilted my head back and breathed in. When I did I saw my husband's eyes watching me intently. I almost forgot that he was holding me and spreading my legs.
"Oh my god," was all I said.
Cameron started pumping his cock into me. With every thrust I felt my pussy stretch and move with him. I could feel the pulling at my clit as he thrust.
I was never a loud fuck, but now, after listening to Julie and Betty, I wanted to be loud.
"Oh my fucking god," I sighed. "This feels so good. I never knew a cock could feel like this."
Julie moved and sat next to Peter. She took my hand.
"I know, Maggie. Enjoy it."
I let myself go. The thrusting became more urgent.
"Ungh, ungh, ungh," I grunted with each thrust. "Oh God yes, fuck me, give me that cock, fuck me. Fuck, fuck, fuck fuck."
Julie held my hand with one hand and played with her clit with the other. "That's it Maggie, take that cock. Fuck him."
The sound of her voice sent me to my first orgasm.
"Ohhhhhhh," I sighed.
"Oh yeah," Julie moaned as she came in her fingers beside me.
Cameron just kept fucking me. Thrust after thrust of his hard body and hard cock. With Peter holding me, and Julie holding my hand, I placed my other hand on Cameron's chest. I felt the hard muscle beneath his skin move with every thrust. I came again.
This time I was louder. ""God yes. Fuck. Fuck me, unghh unghhh unghhh. Fuck."
I suddenly remembered Peter was spreading my legs. "Fuck Peter. His cock is amazing. You're going to have to spread my legs for him again. Any time he asks, I will fuck him. I want to fuck him in our bed."
The thought of lying on my back, in my bed. Peter holding my legs open, and feeling Cameron's hard body on top of me made me cum again.
"Yesssss," I hissed.
Cameron pulled his cock out of me, "Noooooo," I moaned.
With his strong arms he picked me up and flipped me over. I was on my knees. I pressed my head and chest to the floor. I spread my legs a bit so he had complete access to my dripping pussy.
He placed the tip of his cock against my pussy opening again. I was soaking wet. He still took his time with his first thrust. Slowly thrusting back and forth till again he was buried inside me.
I looked at Peter. He pulled his cock out and started jerking it as he watched. Betty had repositioned herself and was sitting on Lou's cock and fucking him. She was grunting as he fucked her.
"Yes, yes, yes."
Now Cameron started really fucking me. I grunted with each thrust. Soon he had me cumming again.
"Fuck yes," I cried.
I was getting tired. Cameron put his strong hands on my hips to steady me. I felt like a rag doll. He was just pushing me and pulling me on his cock. I came one more time. I couldn't fuck back anymore. I collapsed letting his cock slide out of me.
I rolled onto my back and laid there panting.
"Oh my god', I sighed. "That was amazing."
Cameron was kneeling there with his still hard cock in his hand. I spread my legs and begged, "please cum in me."
He positioned himself on top of me and guided his cock into my well stretched pussy. He started fucking me again. With everything I had left I started fucking back.
"Cum for me, please, cum for me, give it too me, squirt inside me," I begged
If it was possible I felt his cock getting bigger. I felt he was going to explode.
"Oh yes," I cried as I came again. "Cum in me. Make my pussy yours."
I felt him shudder and then hot jets of cum squirted against my pussy walls. Even as wet as I was I could feel it hot inside me. Pulse after pulse. Somewhere in my brain I heard Betty cumming beside me. I came again.
He pulled out. I didn't even have the strength to sigh. The last jet of cum landed on my belly and tits, as if he were marking me."
"Mmmmm," I sighed contentedly.
I looked at Peter. I don't know when he came, but he had sticky cum all over his hands and clothes.
I looked at Julie. She smiled at me. "Told ya so," she laughed. I smiled back.
Julie got on her knees and pushed Cameron on his back. "You're not done yet," she said as she lowered her mouth around his cock.
He smiled.
- COMMENTS
Absolutely horrible. I've never skimmed a worse story. Completely disrespectful. This is a fucking nightmare.
Wow. Almost all men wish they could be like Cameron and have women bend to their sex appeal as this story shows. I'm glad I've never come across one though. I would not unbuckle my girl's pants. There would be trouble long before it got to that point.
Who the hell turns down sex just because their mom is next door? That's total bullshit it would make the sex do much hotter. What kind of dumb writing is this? Then the husband and his dad are just ok their wives are screwing the daughter/sisters man? Seriously this is trash writing.
Walk away Peter. Find a loyal woman. Cameron will pay all of your ex-wife's bills.
First, no husband does what you had Peter do and reject his wife because "his mom is down the hall." That's just nonsense you used to set him up to be a pathetic wimp cuck. Hope any wife like Maggie ends up alone on the street, maybe even with a bastard brat for being a cheating skank slut. Nobody even remotely realistic in this story, much less have any brains in their head.
Female authors can write the subtle nuances that simply drive a reader's frisson out of sight! Male writers paint in broad strokes (no pun), whilst female writers play that wicked but subtle, mind-fu*k game. Perfectly written balance between hot and cerebral.
Maggie seduced herself. Peter should start moving money and keepsakes, because it won't be long before Maggie either joins Julie or picks up a new stud.
Fantastic story! The situation, the pacing, the dialogue, the progression and twists in the plot are all so well done. Thank you.
Robert
Hot story, but more shaved pussy...oy vey. At least Maggie kept her bush.
What the hell is wrong with Peter that he won't fuck his wife when his parents are two doors away and probably can't hear them anyway?? They're probably making too much noise of their own anyway. What a dick,. How does a guy of his age have no sex drive, and no sense of adventure??
Yah still stupid and your drivel still infantile. It ages like vinegar and smells like crap.
It ain’t gonna make the hall of fame but the local latrine fo sure.
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Just as soon as I heard my friend well he used to be James asking Ashley my wife what do you want. She grunted omg. I yelled a divorce and his lights went out and I walked away. As I was walking I could hear Ashley saying get off of me you big black bastard. Joe get this SOB off of me please. I called my Uncle as I was driving to her parents to get our children and asked if I could use his cabin for a while that I wanted to take my family up for a trip. He said sure you know the code. I thanked him and hung up. At her parents they said they said Joe good to see you made it home early where is Ashley? She's at home. You could have let the children spend the night and enjoyed the night with your wife. I shocked them by saying that I don't know if that will ever happen again. WHAT'S GOING ON Leo asked? Ask Ashley she is with her lover in our bed when I left. That's not funny now what's going on? No it's not a damn bit funny but that is exactly what's going on. No I can't believe that not Ashley. I gathered up the children and thanked them for taking care of the children and that I didn't think Ashley was capable anymore. I looked at Jack Ashley's father and said thanks for insisting on a prenuptial agreement. He looked like he was ready to blow up. I headed back to our house. I seen her car was gone I didn't know where she went and at the moment I didn't care. I told the children to stay in the car I'd be right back. I grabbed everything that I thought that we would need and would get other things later. I went to a ATM and got the maximum cash. On the way to the cabin my phone rang. It was Ashley crying asking where I and the children were? Why would you care you have your lover. I don't have a lover. I said don't lie to me I have pictures that shows different. O one more thing thank you for signing the prenuptial agreement. Please I'm sorry don't leave me don't take our children away please. Too late you should have thought of that before you got your lover in our bed please burn the damn bed and have the exterminator fogg the house it's hard to tell what you 2 might have brought into my house. I hung up and shut the phone off. We got to the cabin and I carried all 3 children in. They slept but I didn't. In the morning the children were asking where mommy was when is she coming why didn't mommy come. All I could do was shake my head and say that I didn't know. Then it hit me I didn't turn my phone on. Surprise my voice mail and messages was 98 total. Ashley our parents aunt's uncle's cousins friends. Damn I thought. Even James I thought F*** you so called friend. That is what I thought so I text him F*** you you so called friend you homewreacking black SOB. Then I blocked his number. I couldn't think straight. Ashley called as I was reading text. I answered it. What do you want you Big Black Cock Cheating Slut why don't you just go to your damn black homewreacking lover. I heard what sounded like the phone drop. Jack said Mike I got to go Ashley just passed out please talk to her please. By Jack I don't know that I can she has done our family wrong click. I just couldn't handle it I was afraid for the children so I loaded them up and went to my parents. I called them and asked if we could stay there for a while and they said yes. That night I think I just passed out myself. Dad and mom both told me that I needed to talk to Ashley. So I did. I knew that I needed help because I didn't even like myself. I started seeing a therapist. The first time I seen James I went at him like a mad bull. Even though he was 6 inches taller and 75 pounds heavier he didn't stand a chance. I figured I would end up in jail but I heard that he lie and said that he was drunk and fell down the stairs. Ashley also was see a therapist. Her parents begged me to get back together so did mine and family and friends. We did start going to the same therapist. Then we were there at the same time. Then eventually we did move back into the house but our parents seen to remodeling of the house and a new bedroom suite. We made it and I believe we will grow old together. James avoids us and I'm fine with that.
Great write up, i loved the way you introduced characters one by one by opening up, instead of all at once. Also the way cuck is helping the bull getting their wives fucked is really erotic. Lou pulling his wife's jeans for Cameron, peter holding her legs wide for the bull are very fascinating. Please write more. Also I would love to share our personal real life experiences, if any, with you.
This story has too many personality changes to make the story work. Peter too shy to have sex with his wife yet will undress her in front of the family and let some guy they barely know fuck her bareback?
The wife demure the whole time then suddenly her inner slut comes out after some hot guy just says he wants to fuck her. Yea right like most women would slap the guys face especially saying that in front of the whole family.
Let's not forget Mom the boyfriends shops with her and suddenly she is screwing him at home yea right. Too many unlikely scenarios ruins a fantasy it does. Not a fan of cuckholding anyways and never why the authors of those continue to put the category as loving wives when it is not.
I woke up wondering what happened to everyone I must have fell asleep at the camp fire getting up to go to the cabin Barb my wife and I were in. On the way I was hearing sounds of someone having sex. Barb and I were camping with what I thought were friends total of 8 of us. When I got in our cabin Barb wasn't there. I went on the look. Hearing that sound again I went to that cabin. Looking in from the window there was 2 of our friends but they were from 2 different marriages. I was starting to get mad. The next cabin was even another mix still no Barb. I needed to find Barb Andrew and Loren. I went straight to the last cabin looking in the window I pushed the curtain out of the way I seen the two guys sharing my wife. I took a picture then stepped away. I called a buddy Mark that lived not far asking if he could come and help? On my way. He was there in a few minutes. I explained that I only wanted he incase I need help in kicking their asses. I had heard them making Barb tell them how much better they were than me. I kicked in the door and went in like a wild bull all 5 foot 7 and 165 pounds they were both over 6 foot and over 200 pounds. Before I quit Mark had to pull me off. Long story short they didn't drug her but had really pushed the alcohol on to her. Barb didn't drink much. We couldn't get them charged for rape. Eventually all 3 couples moved away. Funny thing all 3 guys had been mugged. We are still together after Barb went through counciling.
Good job! To bad there wasn't a knot-hole for him to fuck, he fucked almost everything else.
XYZ
The way you write just gets my mind going with all sorts of dirty thoughts. Wish I had the courage.
Sorry but you lost me in the first part of the story. Just who is Julie the sister of, Peter or Maggie. She is described as Peters sister and then Maggie calls her my sister? Confusing or what?
Well ,good characters well described but the same old shit a big cock to make all the girls beg for it, crap.
I thought Julie was her husband's sister, but with these authors you never know who they mean! But one thing is for sure, as an author you know best that, according to a study by the renowned Bertalsman Foundation, 98% of all partnerships that tried swinging sharing swaping or cuckolding were broken within two years. Main reason jealousy and / or a partner falls in love again! Statistically, that means two of the partnerships in your story will fail in the next two years. I think Julie's marriage and her sister-in-law's friendship are falling apart. The old ones will last because they are simply too old to start over. So her father will keep the whore, whether or not she is a shining example of the women in the family. The example of father has rubbed off on the son who makes a great cuckold too. But despite everything, I would have one wish. Could your female protagonists become infected with HIV and suffer a slow and agonizing death? Would be nice!!!
First off, no wives were seduced. This was a story about women who simply wanted to be fucked by a big cock, and an arrogant crude guy whose idea of seduction is to make inappropriate comments before eventually saying: "I want to fuck you". It wasn't a bad story for readers who like a cuck story with a plot that makes no sense, but has cock hungry women and a huge cock. For such readers the story was ideal.
Okay so now Maggie has had a very big cock and liked it. By the way, edit the story. Currently, it says when she first saw Cameron's cock, it was NOT a monster. It is then immediately described as 9+ inches when not erect and too thick to get her hand around. Then it grows to 10+ and thickens more. I realize this is fantasy but a cock 10+ inches long that is too thick to hold is a monster cock. What should Maggie do now? If she had a brain, she would have insisted to her husband Peter that they leave after she saw Cameron and Betty. No need to say why they were leaving. Just make up an excuse and go. It was the third day already anyway. At that point it was obvious that her in-laws lived in a different universe than she and Peter, with a completely different value system. It was stupid for her to ride on the snowmobile with Cameron. It was way to obvious that the reason was to force her to hold onto him. Maggie wasn't acting sexy when she submitted to Cameron; she was demonstrating a total lack of self respect. There was never an explanation of Peter's shyness and reluctance to have private sex with his wife (who it was mentioned several times as being a quiet fuck) while the rest of his family behaved like they were porn performers showcasing a noisy brothel. Peter undressing his wife in front of everyone was also out of character for how he had behaved up to then.
Maggie has two options. She can decide to discard her previous life and value system and become a promiscuous women who is constantly in search of different new large cock - which will eventually doom her marriage. After all, why be married? Or Maggie can chalk up the trip as a learning experience and divorce Peter and hope to find a new husband who respects her and just as important, is a man she can respect.
Julie and her parents are fools. Cameron will tire of them. He IS NOT Julie's man! He is a guy who simply relishes fucking different women. When Cameron moves onto someone new, will they blame each other? Maybe they will tell Peter "it was fun while it lasted". Also, their disrespect for the sensibilities of Maggie and Peter was outrageous.
Peter should be ashamed of himself. His future with Maggie is crippled. As she said when he undressed her for Cameron: "are you sure you want this?" "It will change our lives forever. Peter should be angry at his parents and sister. He should consider cutting the brake line on Cameron's car, or maybe hire a 'hit man'.
As others have said, Cameron is a gigantic jerk. His behavior is crude and rude to everyone around him. He doesn't seduce Betty and Maggie; that would be done quietly and secretly. No, he takes them to humiliate their husbands and ensure Julie knows she is easily replaced.
Casual uninhibited raw sex between acquaintances or strangers can be exciting and fun. The situation in this story was not spontaneous fun and it was not similar to an exciting roller coaster ride. This story described people driving a car into into the Grand Canyon so they can enjoy the fall without considering the crash at the bottom.
This was another story not worth reading. Thanks for wasting my time.
I love this author's stories of wanton sex, often with women playing leading roles in their sexual desires. Her ability to produce erotic literature has no boundaries and I find it difficult to be quite so enthused by the situation of sex with close family members. It could be my conservative background showing through but when it came to the stud playing with Mum then his girlfriends Sister, with her Hubby watching, I felt an uneasiness overtaking any erotic feelings I had, so for me, it was a mixed bag with great erotic writing yet wishing the participants were friends and not family. It does not affect my 5* rating however as this is as good as it gets on an erotic scale.
I think that someone should have told Cameron to take a hike. Everyone acted as if he was the cats meow he needed to be told no once in awhile.
I remember our first such party with a friend . We agreed to exchange our GFs , the girls were also willing . This had to happen in the dormitory we were sharing but separate beds and we had to watch every thing to which we had all agreed . I looked at my GF sucking the guy`s cock .The boy bigger than mine and she seemed to like it and took the full length in her mouth and sucked hungrily . Soon he was eating her pussy and sucking her nipples . My girl friend was moaning loudly with lust and then she told him to put his cock in her pussy and fuck her . So he put his tool in her spread up pussy and they were fucking vigorously , his big tool ravishing her cunt in long fast strokes . She had her legs around his waste and was thrusting her hip to match his strokes equally . No doubt she was enjoying the hot fuck Initially I was jealous watching the live sex scene and had repented my decision to let my friend fuck my girl . That moment I was lying with my partner but had lost interest in sex . Only she was stroking my dick but I was passive , showing no response to he maneuvering my cock . Soon the boy had his orgasm and he pulled out and sprayed the contents on her legs , stomach and tits . That changed the whole position and my mind and I was horny . My cock was hard and bursting in her hands . This girl was with was decidedly prettier and sexier than my GF and the scene had made her hornier too , She hinted me to penetrate her pussy straightway but I wanted to prolong the fun . So I told her to suck me while I would eat her pussy and we were doing it at once . I made her spread her legs and pussy lips .The moment my tongue nibbled her clit and entered her hole she was moaning with her first orgasm . She pulled my ass hard with her both hands to jam her pussy with my mouth and equally was sucking my cock with full vigor . The other couple was watching us keenly . My Girl friend could be seen fingering her pussy while looking at us with lust I could not manage any longer and my cock erupted without warning filling her hot mouth with my semen . She drank most of it but still the traces were oozing out from her lips Still she did not let me pull out from her mouth . I was hard with her sucking within no time and then she shouted that i put my tool in her vagina and fuck her . Who was I to refuse her command ! I plunged my tool in her already wet pussy with a single stroke . Having cummed earlier I ravished her pussy for at least 20 minutes by which time she had cum at least 3 times and then I filled her pussy with my semen . All the earlier jealousy and pain over my Gf getting the bigger dick had vanished . Undoubtedly we had better Sex . I had smaller cock compared her Bf but she enjoyed better fuck.
I love cock and pussy. Oh yeah, and I’m a girl.
Its obvious. Just accept it. You are obsessed with cock. Just admit it to everyone. You can pretend you are laughing at the comments. You can pretend that you write these stories to irritate the crowd but that is all bullshit and you know it.
No, the truth is you want to spend the night swallowing some dude's over sized cock. You want to feel the cum sliding down your throat. You want to have him up your ass and then snuggle up to his hairy chest and wake up in the morning looking at his face with love. That's you and all of your fantasies are vicarious thrill through women because you are too chicken shit to be yourself. Man up pussy. Admit you like men too and fucking deal with it. Your pathetic misplaced aggression and trolling is simple homophobia.
\quote: "The erotic consists of the unexpected, the dangerous, the taboo. It moves outside social norms. ... It excites & frightens at the same time."
I would have to disagree with your stated perspective - I find your description far too generalized. For example, I'm sure you would find it erotic to seduce my wife into an illicit affair with you - she is a very attractive and beautiful woman. The seduction and copulation would certainly be unexpected, dangerous, and taboo. Erotic? I think not. No more erotic than my "unexpected and frightening" reaction on learning about the seduction which would be to murder you, your children, your wife, your siblings and their families, your parents and grandparents - in fact your entire family as well as everyone in the world with your surname. And in the most gruesome, sadistic, painful ways I could foster.
Now that, would be outside societal norms - truly erotic!!
Wanna try?
This is a very good erotic fantasy. Eroticism is not safe, it's not secure. It's not the makings of a stable, long term marriage. Yet we still need and desire it in a healthy sexual relationship. (ref. Esther Perel)
The erotic consists of the unexpected, the dangerous, the taboo. It moves outside social norms. This is a good story. It excites & frightens at the same time. Bravo!
Worse than the story are the comments from people think this is good writing.
Forget real life, slip into the world of fantasy, I read this on my tablet in bed. I loved every word, my orgasm was quite intense. Yes this author gets wonderful marks, because she deserves them, provides so much pleasure to her readers. Nobody should be allowed to criticize anonymously, if they have anything to say they should be prepared to put their name to it. It's a pity she doesn't role play in literotica chat rooms her sexy imagination would be so pleasurable to her partner
Given the unlikable characters and their really stupid actions, there was nothing erotic or sexy about this garbage. How this train wreck is highly rated is a complete mystery. But looking at the scores of your other stories I see that you are beloved by Literotica since you never get bad scores even though some of your stories are horrendous messes. Go figure.
1 star
Have our wife crazy about her lovers big dick and be his slut our slut.
I've never written a story, so i don't critique. I will say the story left me feeling bad for some reason. Confusing i know, considering I did like the story.
Like father,like son! A couple of sick wimpy bastards! ~ What a family! Mom and sis run around half naked and compete to see who can be louder during sex.Dad jerks off while sitting there watching his wife get plowed by his daughter's heavy hung boyfriend,to be followed by sonny boy Pete having Heavy Hung stick it to his wife while she's sitting on his lap. Just some good clean family fun,I suppose. ~ All sorts of follow-up sequels are possible with this fun bunch. The 3 women can take on the local football team while Dad and Pete cheer them on. Blow job contests can develop,and for the gay crowd Dad and Pete can 69 with the girls cheering them on. Air-Tight Night could be another family affair. Soon ,when Julia and Maggie get knocked up the family can have "DNA Night" as they play,"Guess the Father". ~ Good,clean family fun!)~ Actually this was a sexy,well written story if you're willing to suspend reality while you read it. Good,clean family fun!
... who doesn't love a wife that wants strange cock?
BULLSHIT! You expect adults who are obviously sharp enuff to be able to afford a trip like this, to be dumb enuff to let the Pied Piper of Crooked Cock swoop their wives right from under their dead ass?! BULLSHIT - that is spread so thick, it would take a team of World Class cocksuckers to lick it clean.
One afternoon at a black friend's apartment he stripped my wife naked while my back was turned to them talking to his friends (one black woman, and an interracial couple with a blonde wife). Later that evening I came upon my slender wife being spitroasted by the two black guys in one of the bedrooms. As the evening was winding down the other two women brought my wife into the living room draped in a blanket and had her sit between them in the middle of three kitchen chairs. At first it just seemed like a bonding thing but as they pulled the blanket off my wife their legs were hooked over hers to keep her spreadeagled. My wife's eyes rolled back in her head from the eroticism of it as the two women proceeded to finger her wide open cunt with the husband of the interracial couple sitting on the floor about a foot away from my wife's juicing pussy.
It was just another of several hot episodes in our interactions with this black man and his friends. I wouldn't be surprised if Willie and his friends still laugh about the white couple in their 30's who they used to cuckold and use in many outrageous ways in the early 70's.
His place was like a magnet to us and once we were there we were there to be used in almost any way. Very hot times!
There is nothing in your biography which states anything about you. Your condemning of an anonymous's comments is crap. You are no different than the rest of us. Also this story is very unreal. It implies that cuckold behavior is hereditary which has never been proven.
"Fuck Peter. His cock is amazing. You're going to have to spread my legs for him again. Any time he asks, I will fuck him. I want to fuck him in our bed."
This is one of the hottest things I could imagine a woman saying. Great job!
I gave up reading after these two comments....I won't fuck you with my mother in the same house and my husband didn't like blowjobs! Nuff said!!!
I take my shots in the open. You take yours from the bushes. I don't read stories I know I will hate and take shots at the authors. I only read stories i think i have a possibility of enjoying. If they turn out to be well-done, I compliment the author. If they turn out to be a waste of my time, I say that, too. I don't give a damn who writes them. If they're good, I say so. If they suck, I say so. My opinion. And, I'm going to be back tomorrow. I don't call people names, use racist or sexist slurs, don't make gender slurs and don't lace my comments with profanity. I have an email address registered and you are free to send feedback and tell me just how miserable you think I am. I have a story with this ID on it out there, and you can tell me just how bad it is in a comment. I may not have "balls" but I do have the guts to put all that out there. How about you? What's the state of your "balls?"
What Foolscap is saying is that people who have names take ownership of their comments. Swinger Joe, Luedon, Foolscap, Kimi, all of them owned what they said in their back and forths.. They stood behind it. If you had a problem with it, you could respond to them.
Anons take no ownership. They just sling shit. It's the difference between fighting fair and throwing a sucker punch before running and hiding in the crowd.
Not saying that all anonymous comments are bad. A lot of them are insightful and well thought out. But the majority of them are suckerpunches and hiding. They don't have to engage in dialogue, but if they say something crappy and don't feel the need to take ownership, then that is a chickenshit move.
Take BlackRandi for instance. No one would have would have the balls to leave a Niggerandi comment attached to a name. They would get blasted. But they can be a chickenshit and leave it anonymously.
But I highly doubt anyone who writes "1 star cuck wimp shit" or crap or w/e is going to want to have dialogue with anyone even if they did have account. I do see some people write horrible stuff (not judging I write horrible comments on authors stories too because I'm mad) but it's always the Anons that get called out. Calling someone a chickenshit because they don't have an account rustles my jimmies.
Trying to engage with Anonymous is like trying to deal with Dissociative Identity Disorder and the scores of thousands of Anonymous expressions. At least with individual identifiers dialog is possible.
Though I confess that looking for meaningful dialog on a porn site seems to be a fool's errand.
Or they can't be bothered to make an account? So it's okay for me to write a crappy comment about the author and this story saying it's absolute garbage because I have an account? I'm brave because I took a minute to make an account to say this story was absolute garbage?
Lol dude you are delusional. I never get that why people get mad at the Anon comments for that reason. What difference does it make if he has an account or not. So author can point that commenter out by name instead of (date)?
Your kind of comments piss me off the most. Lol brave because he made an account, what a joke dude. I skimmed the story and thought it was awful, but wasn't going to comment till I saw your stupid comment.
It was alright for the subject matter. What I find really amusing is the Anon that keeps trying to *1* bomb the author and insult her. I figure if you're not brave enough to make yourself available for a direct author response you're nothing but a chickenshit nobody needs to listen to.
Well written and hot! I, too, thought about giving it a 1* because, after all, how could all those "experts" who assured us this was a pile of crap be wrong. I ended up holding my nose and giving you a 5*. Hope I haven't offended you or the experts. Now that I think about it, though, all they ever are is offended.
Blaine
P.S. I find your bio intriguing.
Interesting. Who is the douche bag here? Let's see one guy comments what he thinks of the story, the other guy makes an assumption of the guys personal life and insults him. Who needs to get a life? JoelTorrid, I think you drank too much of your cool aid. I take it this story got you off and now you're mad somebody else didn't get off too. I really think you're the douche bag and a sorry ass too boot. ONE STAR
The anonymous douchebag below says the same shit on every hotwife tale. Must be a tiny dicked guy who is angry he can't please his wife. Or maybe he's upset that he likes these stories. Because for a guy that acts like he hates this stuff, he reads an awful lot of it. Get a life, dude.
Great story and would love a sequel! There is something HOT about the husbands being present and made to participate in the seduction of their wives.
but I can't award any more. But I would if I could!
Thanks so much. Best stroker in the past six months.
Bluejacket01.
I liked the idea of the cabin, the family together, the wives who lusted for Cameron. But I did not like at all the way it was done; him boldly, in front of the husband's, just taking the women. I prefer a more seductive approach. So, for me, basically...meh.
Good story, combines all the 'hot sexual buttons' for a good story, well hung guy that services his dates mother and sister.
If they don't like the story they don't have to read it. Just because someone isn't into something does mean they have bash it. Clearly it pushed a button or they wouldn't feel the need to rant.
Personally I love a hot wife and thought it made for a hot read. Keep it up.
Didn't read the story, but did read the bio. Notice you are NOT into humiliation, but you love cuckold stories? Guess what you meant was you don't like seeing women being humiliated. And people like rclink just go on and on about anonymous replies. He or she has a name EVERYTHING is no answer. So we don't go on here and give our info to this site. So fucking what, personally I don't want the spam and junk mail signing up and giving info would cause me.
Sorry for all the Anonymous negativity. I am sure that is why more people don't submit stories. I enjoyed your story. Maybe a little out there but I have seen similar things in real life. So by all means keep writing.
I'm not going to go on a rant like those insecure douchebags (especially anonymous insecure douchebags), but honestly the fact that this woman settled for Peter, who seems more or less asexual is pretty sad.
Another stupid cuck is born Peter fucked no one not even his wife but got off watching and even helping his wife being fucked by another man.
This cum dumpster author gets turned on by negative comments, so I will just give her a 1*** so her bitch Laurel can change it like always.... Only way this loser would ever get a high score is with help and we all know it......
"I assume my scores are high because I hold family members hostage at Gitmo."
Holy shit, you too? I thought I was the only one doing that? Man, now everyone knows our secret to high score!
You're one of the best (if not the best) writers on this site. I've read and love all your stories. There are a lot of haters on LW but most of them have already voted and commented, so your scores are going to soar sky high on this story from now on. Keep up the good work and never be afraid to publish them of LW.
You've admitted to calling for sweeps. Everyone knows you cheat.
Suppose you and I both write stories. Everyone hates mine and everyone loves yours. We both get 1000 votes. I get 800 ones and 200 fives. You get 20 ones, 20 twos, 60 threes 400 fours and 500 fives. Your score is 4.50 and mine is 2.50. Those numbers are ridiculous, but I have a point.
I copy this author's playbook and call for a sweep. They check all the stories and throw out 40 of those votes on your story. They throw out 800 on mine. Now you have a 4.52 and I have a 5.00. You worked your ass off to write a good story. I wrote some trash and I have a better score than you do. That's how this works. Bad writers get a huge reward. Good ones get a tiny crumb. That's how you're getting dissed.
inteligent logic? Why ruin their conspiricy theories. I assume my scores are high because I hold family members hostage at Gitmo.