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Click hereAll the promises you made to me
were a distortion of reality.
You plucked a page from my fantasy
and gave it monstrous life.
You fleshed it out with hopes and dreams,
added detail,
made it seem
so fucking real.
But the real truth was you spun a lie.
You stole my love and sucked me dry.
- COMMENTS
<i>You plucked a page from my fantasy/and gave it monstrous life/You fleshed it out with hopes and dreams</i> are the best lines in the poem. I'd like to see you continue with the extended metaphor. Show the reader more of this monstrous creation, more of how it was fleshed out, more details about the hopes and dreams, etc.