All Comments on 'Black Roommate and Blonde GF'
by DWornock
- 14 Comments
The first page was okay, but then it just rambles to the point of not being able to follow....and not wanting to.
Started off ok but turned really painful to read, needs a lot of work
I only disagree with the comments below in that I thought the first page was good-- much better than okay.
The next two pages however...hard pass.
Obviously a butthurt incel. Get fit, wear nice close, and dont be an ass. Cheating happens. Get used to it beta male.
Jesus I'm not even sure where to start with this... Look a lot of erotica and porn has racist and/or sexist elements, but this really takes that to another level. I'd really encourage you to take a long look at the way you've presented gender and race in this, because frankly it's a bit sickening.
Excellent read on a porn point of view but also sociologicaly. I thought everything was quite true to life. Guys facts don't lie. I think the writer may have been hurt at on time but yes I feel that woman today are generally like that. Not all but much more than 10 years ago. The court system has endorsed a no win policy for guys. It's about fairness for the child. Anyway great read. Thank you.
Racist, InCel, “Nice guy”, MGTOW fantasy drivel!!!
This reads like a 1500 word cheating girlfriend story that was plagiarized by changing the character names, then filed with 3000 words of Men’s Movement Kiol-aide editorializing while role-playing a successful ladies man. Pure Garbage.
Consider: Was told his girlfriend cheated, but he ignored the warning. Watched his girlfriend cheat, then got rejected by her when asked for sex, and then continued to date her while she continued to cheat until she dumped him, knowingly taking sloppy seconds the whole time. Basically admitting to being a cuck. Then hooks up with her repeatedly after she ends it with the guy she left him for.
Diverges into this whole delusional fantasy of selling his photo editing software for $250K but kept it a secret (because that is so easy) only to go on to create a new multi-million dollar a year generating software to explain his ultimate goal of getting the hot young 19 year old wife
Let’s not neglect the most egregious “hit the wall” trope. Junior in college thinks senior girl is “too old”. She is past her prime. Used up all her fun with bigger, better guys and now she is no longer prime dating material with 22/23 being little more than a washed up cum dump, but “I’ll still fuck her until she tries to get a commitment” because only a simp would do that.
And how are you going to be okay with a black roommate, that stole “the love of your life”, then be his bitch boy helping him cheat on her repeatedly and try to offer him good friend advice (which of course he didn’t take, because he’s uneducated, don’t worry I’m pointing out your racist tropes here) and then just casually throw out the “N-word” like it’s just a happenstance coincidence.
Summation: If this was intentionally written as a parody or satirical commentary on MGTOW/INCEL hive mind group think, then Bravo!!! Well done! Good show! Sadly the poor execution and delivery makes this read like an unrehearsed jumble of word salad written by someone who didn’t sip the Kool-aide but gulped the entire pitcher.
Really good and accurate story, down to the tiniest details of custody and divorce rape laws. 5*.
I would suggest deleting the negative comments. They're useless and angry rants over nothing, and have no structure or logic to them. I don't necessarily believe that pretty white (& slutty) sorotity girls always want black guys to bang, and they're always the quarterback a-holes who just think of the next conquest, but everything is accurate in a way. Most people will look for upgrades in all ways.
The angry comments are from the same women you mentioned in the last page who HATE it when men have their own choices, but are pro choice in making men walking wallets. I hope they end up childless and with cats, and the men supporting them have no other upgrades available, LOL. If someone wants a sperm donor to raise a baby themselves, anyone can get an egg donor to raise babies.
Actually well written for what it is. What is it? Comes across like a parable written by a callow young college male disappointed by their distorted 'dating and mating' game. An 'incel' perhaps? That is what it is. The truth is that millions of years of primate evolution weight in heavily on youngsters going through that 'dating and mating' phase. My sequel would be titled "Bonobos Behaving Badly". But it's NOT androgynous as current young folk belief assumes though. Men SEW their sexual wild oats quite literally, while women are SOWN (SEWN?) by wild oats. The expression applied to women is just metaphorical, not reality. And only some of that is negated by contraception with risky behavior. Females have a LOT more risk, and traditional law recognizes that. Modernization means freeing that risk from traditional patriarchy, but biological risk is still risk even without it. So this parable is really quite puerile in it's message. But I'm guessing it's written that way. If so, well done.
BTW: A man can marry a woman with another's child. I did in grad school with a 22-yr old woman (fellow grad student) who screwed up her contraception and got dumped. We were close friends BEFORE that happened. She stuck with me like glue, matured quickly, left her wild child phase behind for her child, and went on to her own graduate degree as my partner. 32 years later, we're still married with three adult children. She even did DNA testing on her second without being asked. Fear or devotion? Does it matter? Nope.
Spite, the person in the story lost his GF to his roommate to the point she kicked him to the curb. Mow out of spite he have sex with other women out of spite of his EX. If anyone have sex out of spite you could be missing your soulmate because you refuse to know a person.