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I'm glad this has been published but after reading it through again I can see some typo's and punctuation mistakes, damn it! apologies for that.
Your self-review is refreshing to see.
Interesting scenario and ideal for numerous added chapters, including and adding to your suggested next meeting.
Well done, looking forward to subsequent offerings.
I don't go for 'Pamela Anderson' types so this wasn't my cup of tea...
2 stars and a yawn...
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