All Comments on 'Dad Loves Feet, Lindsay Loves Money'
by QuietNightFantasy
- 17 Comments
Who is Angela?
That's one example of many illustrating either your laziness or ignorance. It doesn't really matter which; both have the same result of a poorly written submission.
........Feet...... Why feet? Sure, it's some peoples fetish, but at least put that on the cover, as some people find feet repulsive (like myself) 3 stars. It would have been a good story if they had actually FUCKED, and it it was about something other than feet. Though that's just my opinion. Some people like feet, just make sure they actually do something erotic before it closes
A good setup for sure: a daughter has her dad enthralled by her beauty and sexual energy and she uses him for money (while also, hopefully, enjoys the sexual acts).
It was sad to see you didn't actually have them have sex. Is there going to be a sequel or is this it?
I think if this had been where she had enthralled him and they actually had sex it would've been more erotic with her controlling him. (I gotta admit and say I have such a story in mind, but it's up to you what you do with this.)
If you don't like feet why would you read the story? It's literally part of the title. I may do a part 2 with intercourse, this story was a commission and the request was for only foot play, no sex.
And yea cagey, I fucked that up. Appreciate the criticism
I really enjoyed your story and rate it highly. I also have fun writing about spoiled girls and foot fetishes. Please write more stories about spoiled girls manipulating men with their fetishes to get what they want.
My daughter, in her twenties, worked professionally and lived at home. She often wore just pantyhose and ran around the house that way. She drove me crazy. She had grown into a beautiful mature woman. She has gorgeous 40D breasts. I often saw her pussy hair mashed flat against her abdomen by her sheer pantyhose and her pussy lips just as described in this story. She kept me hard all the time, and she knew it, and she loved that she could do that to me. She finally had mercy and jacked me off frequently while letting me feel her wet pussy through the pantyhose. Her pussy smell was so erotic. We finally went much further.
The fear of being a financial sub crumbles from the need and lust for that powerful paygasm. Great hot story