All Comments on 'Daddy & Princess' Day Out'

Worst story I've read here for a long time. Childish and immature and I doubt very much that the writer is over 14 let alone 18.

More stories with little princess and big cocks!

Interesting first story; need to work on typos and grammar. It's also a little cliche; she's too innocent for the 21st century.

Yummy just yummy. Can't wait for a follow up

There was a lot about this fic that's troubling. I feel like this story belongs more in rape non-consensual than taboo. Not that you aren't allowed to write about it, but it was an instant turn-off for me.

What I hate most, is when some writer takes a pedo fantasy from some other site, then edits it just enough to sneak it past the posting rules by saying she's in college, when every other word would have made far more sense if she was introduced as being ten in the first paragraph. Gross.

Not only does the writer seem like a grade schooler, the daughter sounds like she's maybe 12, tops.

I quite reading with any interest the second he forced her-threatened her- and called her a slut. I don't like the stories where the Dads become total assholes. I do love this site and all the taboo incest stories. I prefer it when the Dad actually shows his love for his child (no force or blackmail) and not just give it lip service....not the ones where Dad becomes aggressive to the point he ignores his own daughters wishes. If Dad is going to be an asshole and take her it needs to go into the reluctance/non-consent category.

reads like it's been written by a 15 yr old, needs a complete rewrite

Pathetic, Waste of time, "writing" and reading. Write something original and creative or don't bother wasting your time and ours.

For what it’s worth I throughly enjoyed this story and really want to see more!!

Complete trash.