All Comments on 'Dad's Fertility Farm Ch. 02'
by CD_Karen
- 7 Comments
Not sure what to think. I believe the actions were a bit rushed, as if the author really did not know how to tie up a finish. The ending seemed final so no further chapters are expected or needed or wanted.
I read both ch.01 and ch.2 and both were so hot. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories. Excellent job!
This duology should be titled "Karen's Fertility Farm", as "Dad" has little to do with impregnating anyone. The daughters are both knocked up by Karen. Bring in Jenna---she gets fucked by both Dad and Karen, so the baby only has a 50% chance of being his. Bring in the sister-in-law---you think Brian is going to get a shot at impregnating her, but no, it's her son she's interested in. And lastly we have the farm manager---when we first found out it was a woman back in CH. 01, we naturally think she'll be impregnated by Brian eventually, but again no, she's not wanting to be pregnant, but has a lesbian wife who is, and once again, it is Karen who gets to do the honors. Out of all the pregnancies, Dad has only a 50% chance of being the father in only one of them. Dad's impregnation fantasy, which was supposedly the basis for this series, remains unfulfilled.
It's not that this is all bad, it's not. It is just that the premise, as stated in CH. 01's description, is the old "Bait and Switch" swindle. You sold us one thing, but delivered us something else entirely. It is a jumble of different story ideas thrown together with little rhyme or reason, loosely tied together by the farm and Karen's sperm. Dad fucking (and impregnating) his daughters became an afterthought, rather than the focus, as it should have been.
I applaud you for getting two of my three fetishes. Please add smoking in the next chapter for the trifecta!
I just read this while at work and my panties are now wet! My pussy is throbbing and begging to be fucked! I'm going to have to go to the bathroom and rub my pussy!