All Comments on 'Dowdy Mother in Law Ch. 06'
by CrassiusNomex
- 9 Comments
Please, please do not take a break! I have been following your story since the first one and I've been checking everyday!!!
Wonderful story. So well written. I’ve read all of the chapters and have given them a Five Star. This is my first comment Please don’t leave to long for the next chapter I can’t wait !
Awesome - I had just requested some justification/crack in their marriage to justify their actions and you delivered. (That's what I get for being late to the party.) 5*
Description of her undies in any of the chapters would have improved them.
The chapters would be a lot better with description of her undies,a common fault with authors.Also the woman from the church seemed interested in his trouser snake,are we going to get her in the story?.